Yah! Glad they got Jared out of there and I'm sure jensen will help him get better but I would have shot that prick *glares and curses at* just cos he deserved it! But I hope he gets taught a lesson either way!
Yay =D im glad you loved how it turned out. and I agree, Jen is so sweet. Well im not sure when I can update next cause my comps still broken but I'll try my best to get it up as soon as I can. Thanks alot for commenting Catt . . . <3
Sorry to hear aboutyour computer. I can relate. I recently had to replace mine after the old one conked out & was not fixable
Glad thatyou were able to post an update to this & glad to see that Chris was able to get there in time to help Jensen & Jared.
Just a few things I am wondering about. WHy did no one call the police. If not before going into the house at least after to have Jack arrested ?Why is no one concerned about how Jensen is , I'm sure that beating he took was not very good ? Or Jared for that matter. They both need a Dr
The other thing is a small inconsistency in the story. When Jared is looking for his uncle you say that Chris is standing next to Jensen & then a few sentences later Chris is somewhere that Jensen has to point to.
Hope you computer is okay soon so you can post another update soon
Yeah the computer thingy really sucks lol. Well anyways thanks for pointing out the thing about where they were standing and all, I'll try and fix it lol.
But dont worry they both get taken to the doctor in the next Chapter. and Jensen only called chris at first cause he didn't think what was going on was as serious as it was, and he panicked and ran in without thinking when he heard Jared scream out in pain therefore leaving the police uncontacted.
Thanks alot for commenting and your opinions, I really appreciate it.
Re: Chris to the rescue...DamncatherineacklesJanuary 21 2008, 02:07:34 UTC
Yeah I decided to add something about Chris's past in there plus it added to Jensens whole caring personality thingy and all. and sorry but sadly Jack will be back. Not in the next chapter but he will eventually. Thanks alot for commenting Catt . . . <3
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God i love how it turned out!
Cant wait for more!
Jen is so sweet! *pats Jared* poor boy!
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and I agree, Jen is so sweet.
Well im not sure when I can update next cause my comps still broken but I'll try my best to get it up as soon as I can.
Thanks alot for commenting
Catt . . . <3
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love this chapter! look forward to watching the boys relationship blossom!
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and yups lots more blossoming to come.
Thanks for reading im glad your enjoying it =D
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Glad thatyou were able to post an update to this & glad to see that Chris was able to get there in time to help Jensen & Jared.
Just a few things I am wondering about. WHy did no one call the police. If not before going into the house at least after to have Jack arrested ?Why is no one concerned about how Jensen is , I'm sure that beating he took was not very good ? Or Jared for that matter. They both need a Dr
The other thing is a small inconsistency in the story. When Jared is looking for his uncle you say that Chris is standing next to Jensen & then a few sentences later Chris is somewhere that Jensen has to point to.
Hope you computer is okay soon so you can post another update soon
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Well anyways thanks for pointing out the thing about where they were standing and all, I'll try and fix it lol.
But dont worry they both get taken to the doctor in the next Chapter. and Jensen only called chris at first cause he didn't think what was going on was as serious as it was, and he panicked and ran in without thinking when he heard Jared scream out in pain therefore leaving the police uncontacted.
Thanks alot for commenting and your opinions, I really appreciate it.
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and sorry but sadly Jack will be back. Not in the next chapter but he will eventually.
Thanks alot for commenting
Catt . . . <3
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