Title: Goodbyes Author: Tosca (tosca1390) Rating: PG Word Count: 575 Notes: Being invited to this has been such an honor! Thanks to Becca for the invite. I hope you enjoy!
Anyway, I loved this. I really, really loved this. I liked how there wasn't any dialogue (unless you want to include Ginny's note), but I was still able to completely understand how both Harry and Ginny felt. I liked the sexualness of the first part when you wrote about their 'goodbye' because it wasn't explicit and it wasn't so detailed that I felt awkward because they weren't experts. It was more sweet and emotional that way, for me. It's like how if you don't know what the bad parts are like, then all you can remember is the good stuff.
And the inclusion of the snitch! That was my favorite, because I can definitely see Harry taking it along with him during the search and pulling it out every now and then to relax and to be reminded of Ginny. It would also be very James of him and I love James, so yeah, really liked that detail.
You’ll see me again when it counts; I’m not letting you fight alone, even if I can’t be there with you. I love you. Ginny.Yeah, not gonna lie, that made me tear up a bit. It
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Nice -- I love the idea of the Snitch as a messenger between them. Your description of Ginny's goodbye to him was great, too: it really seems like something Ginny would do, to give him a little extra motivation to come home. ;)
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Anyway, I loved this. I really, really loved this. I liked how there wasn't any dialogue (unless you want to include Ginny's note), but I was still able to completely understand how both Harry and Ginny felt. I liked the sexualness of the first part when you wrote about their 'goodbye' because it wasn't explicit and it wasn't so detailed that I felt awkward because they weren't experts. It was more sweet and emotional that way, for me. It's like how if you don't know what the bad parts are like, then all you can remember is the good stuff.
And the inclusion of the snitch! That was my favorite, because I can definitely see Harry taking it along with him during the search and pulling it out every now and then to relax and to be reminded of Ginny. It would also be very James of him and I love James, so yeah, really liked that detail.
You’ll see me again when it counts; I’m not letting you fight alone, even if I can’t be there with you. I love you. Ginny.Yeah, not gonna lie, that made me tear up a bit. It ( ... )
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