"Goodbyes"

Oct 15, 2006 22:04

Title: Goodbyes
Author: Tosca (tosca1390)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 575
Notes: Being invited to this has been such an honor! Thanks to Becca for the invite. I hope you enjoy!

Goodbyes )

challenge:snitch, author:tosca

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Comments 14

eimajunknown October 16 2006, 03:54:53 UTC
i like using the snitch as motivation, as it's sort of what brought them together in the first place.

i also like that the fic is very understated, and there's a lot in so few words.

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re: Goodbyes rutzy69 October 16 2006, 09:13:22 UTC
it's full of hope which is what H&G shippers need to read more when tackling this Ginny-left-behind plot --the situation is dire as it is and i am certain canon Ginny would make things whatever is easier for Harry to handle, including being brave and not showing any vulnerability with Harry's decision. good H&G fanfic :>

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pixie_caramel21 October 16 2006, 10:44:23 UTC
Ah, lovely little piece here. Succinct is the word that springs to mind. :) I'm loving how appropriate my default icon is for this challenge!

Be merry!
Rach

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stmargarets October 16 2006, 12:19:22 UTC
Beautiful description of their farewell love-making. (How I wish that could be true for them) I love the idea of the Snitch as their messanger. Very sweet and hopeful.

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girlspell October 16 2006, 15:39:19 UTC
Lovely use of the snitch. The use of the snitch pulls the whole thing together. Love the narrative, different that you did not or very little dialogue. Sweet and to the point.

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ladytonks October 17 2006, 23:10:09 UTC
So very much conveyed in such an economy of words. This was a very creative use of the snitch. I loved it!

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