fic // tvxq // our little princess #12

[catachrestical]

Title: Our Little Princess
Author: catachrestical
Keywords: Bandfic; hints of JaeHo and YooSu; some original characters.
Rating: PG13 for few language mishaps.
Disclaimer: Do not own, did not happen.
Notes: There are orphaned children and there is TVXQ, who had to go through hell and back to acquire them.

First version beta'd by janeberryblue; current version re-beta'd by bel_chan

Comments

[virginangelic]

Thank you for clearing that up. I can go to sleep happy now since the kids are with whom they belong! I'll await your next update!

[catachrestical]

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

[joongielover]

OH MAN. I HAD TEARS WHEN YOOCHUN WAS TALKING TO KANEKO.
Really, I was like, finally. 'Really happy :D.
WOOTWOOT.
Ahhhh, next is last chapter? T___T.
Update soooooooon, XD.

[catachrestical]

::gives you hanky:: :D;

XD Thank you for reading, love, and I'm glad this chapter made you happy. Yes, I think the next chapter will be the last chapter, still debating of an epilogue or not ;)

[joongielover]

*threatens you for an epligue* LOL. *gives cookies*

[catachrestical]

...right. "for" not "of". This is why I need a beta.

COOKIES ♥

[bitterkoekjes]

I had this feeling that you'd update the story soon. That, and reading your comments/talk with bel. I feel like a stalker now. I'll just shut up. :X

Sooo, the story, right. I started crying here, “What took you so long?" The same kind of hitch ChangMin heard in Kaneko's voice. Stopped for a while, and then again, here, "Welcome home." Softly, with a smile that held a world of affection. *sniffles

[catachrestical]

XDD You're ♥

*gives you tissue* You read this story before, Rie XDD WHY ARE YOU STILL CRYING. *pats*

I can't tell you the end of the story yet :) I mean, you know me. I'm a sucker for happy ending and it will be a happy ending, but maybe a twist~? I've yet to decide how to tackle the YunJae/YooSu *bricked*

:''D If Pandy's ever dating ChangMin and Micky ever finds out, I think he's gonna go, "I don't know whether I should feel sorry for you or him." To Pandy XDD

♥ I'm glad. Thanks for reading and reviewing, love, and if I'm writing that sequel, the title will NOT be "Pandy" XDD Mostly because this is not a sitcom 8'D

[bitterkoekjes]

BUT WHY NOT PANDY? alskdjalksjda

How about The Box? The Box & The Quagmire? The Box & The Quagmire sitting on a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G? There are sitcoms with long titles, y'know? What, not a sitcom? Dang. It sure feels like watching a drama/sitcom. I've told you about the Lorelai & Emily wave :DDDDDD

And I can't help crying. Those two sentences trigger the waterwork EVERY SINGLE TIME. Like just now, when I re-read the story. *desk*

Omg. Chun would ttly say that line. I can already imagine the scenes. See, this is totally drama/sitcom material, lady. That girl from Wonderful Life can be Kaneko :DDDD

AND PLZ PLZ BE A HAPPY ENDING WITH A TWIST! Twist is ♥♥♥

[catachrestical]

IDK I JUST DON'T LIKE IT D:

... That would mean 'The Box & The Swamp', you know. NOT A VERY PRETTY NAME. But that is a cracky idea :') THIS IS NOT A SITCOOOM.

*pat pat* I hope I can produce more sentences like that :')

We'll see. Still working :3

[atobekazuki]

Yaaa!!!! Update!!!!!

::runs off to read::

I just came back from school....and I'm a bit hyper - blame the heat! lol

[atobekazuki]

...::sighs::

The kids are back! I teared up slightly when I read the part between Chunnie and Kane.

So the YunJae is slowly showing itself....not that it wasn't there before, but they are moving more steadily towards the "togetherness". lol

The YunJae fight....::laughs:: I loved how Min described it.

Yes, ladies and gentlemen, live from Dong Bang Shin Ki family's shared bedroom: band appa was wearing his Dangerous Love Bedroom Scene pout in tandem with the ultimate kicked-puppy look. I have to admit that that alone could've made me reconsider my decisions, but then again, I wasn't the band umma.

haha....I think he, being our lovable leader-sshi, would get everything in the world if he used that pout. ::swoons::

::hugs:: Good luck with chapter 13 and the spin-off...take your time! lol...::sulks off to do Japanese, Math and Econ homework:: This was amazing to get me in the mood for not doing homework. >.>; hehehe

<333333333333333333333333333

[atobekazuki]

>.>

Yes...I read it again. XP lol

and I loved the last bit with YunJae...and YooSu. lol

::giggles:: I can see this actually happening: YooChun and JunSu went to the living room an hour later to call JaeJoong and YunHo because they were going to sleep soon--piled in one room, of course--and found their two hyungs fast asleep on the couch; YunHo on his stomach with his head on JaeJoong's heart, and JaeJoong's hand resting in mid-stroke between leader-hyung's hair. ::sigh:: Wouldn't that be a sight to see?

[catachrestical]

Hi again XD Two times? This is flattering ♥

YunHo was having JaeJoong-withdrawal 8D Thus, JaeJoong snuggles 8DD He might not even have gone to sleep if JaeJoong wasn't there 8DD

[feyla]

I loved the end of this chapter! And the little discussion between Yoochun and JunSu. And them getting the children back. I really loved it all XD. I think that's about all I can say right now. I just really liked it.

And on the subject of updates, whatever's best for you is good. Chapters to me have to contain enough, and so whenever you have that is when you should post it.

[feyla]

And ChangMin's commentary on the JaeHo argument. I liked that too. That just made it even better!

[catachrestical]

♥ I'm very glad to hear that :3

:') I have this tendency to write very long chapters, yes (4000-5000+ words), I just don't know where is enough and everything. But thanks for your continued support ♥