fic // tvxq // our little princess #12

[catachrestical]

Title: Our Little Princess
Author: catachrestical
Keywords: Bandfic; hints of JaeHo and YooSu; some original characters.
Rating: PG13 for few language mishaps.
Disclaimer: Do not own, did not happen.
Notes: There are orphaned children and there is TVXQ, who had to go through hell and back to acquire them.

First version beta'd by janeberryblue; current version re-beta'd by bel_chan

Comments

[bitterkoekjes]

I had this feeling that you'd update the story soon. That, and reading your comments/talk with bel. I feel like a stalker now. I'll just shut up. :X

Sooo, the story, right. I started crying here, “What took you so long?" The same kind of hitch ChangMin heard in Kaneko's voice. Stopped for a while, and then again, here, "Welcome home." Softly, with a smile that held a world of affection. *sniffles*

And then the story ended with a fluff (and maybe, a different kind of plot, preferably not angst!!) with the children are back with the boys (major fluffy-sweet-new-parents scenes!), the new-but-old development of Yunjae (dreaded major angsty scenes), the let-it-flow Yoosu (hmmm...) and the might-be PandyMin (hurraah!).

You might go with explosive!Mouse not wanting sister to date brother, because that would be like, incest (LOL!) or whatever. Or emo!Mouse and PandyMin going backstreet (omgso-old-skool XD) Or or or they're all wrong and I'm a know-it-all. XDDD

I got the main gist of the story, and IMO, being benefactors for Julia out of guilt would never be an option for the Arisugawa, because they are what they are. Selfish and mean old people XDD

Good luck with chapter 13 and the spin-off! You can even name the story Pandy, like Joey. Right. Lame. ILU ♥

[catachrestical]

XDD You're ♥

*gives you tissue* You read this story before, Rie XDD WHY ARE YOU STILL CRYING. *pats*

I can't tell you the end of the story yet :) I mean, you know me. I'm a sucker for happy ending and it will be a happy ending, but maybe a twist~? I've yet to decide how to tackle the YunJae/YooSu *bricked*

:''D If Pandy's ever dating ChangMin and Micky ever finds out, I think he's gonna go, "I don't know whether I should feel sorry for you or him." To Pandy XDD

♥ I'm glad. Thanks for reading and reviewing, love, and if I'm writing that sequel, the title will NOT be "Pandy" XDD Mostly because this is not a sitcom 8'D

[bitterkoekjes]

BUT WHY NOT PANDY? alskdjalksjda

How about The Box? The Box & The Quagmire? The Box & The Quagmire sitting on a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G? There are sitcoms with long titles, y'know? What, not a sitcom? Dang. It sure feels like watching a drama/sitcom. I've told you about the Lorelai & Emily wave :DDDDDD

And I can't help crying. Those two sentences trigger the waterwork EVERY SINGLE TIME. Like just now, when I re-read the story. *desk*

Omg. Chun would ttly say that line. I can already imagine the scenes. See, this is totally drama/sitcom material, lady. That girl from Wonderful Life can be Kaneko :DDDD

AND PLZ PLZ BE A HAPPY ENDING WITH A TWIST! Twist is ♥♥♥

[catachrestical]

IDK I JUST DON'T LIKE IT D:

... That would mean 'The Box & The Swamp', you know. NOT A VERY PRETTY NAME. But that is a cracky idea :') THIS IS NOT A SITCOOOM.

*pat pat* I hope I can produce more sentences like that :')

We'll see. Still working :3

[bitterkoekjes]

But Quagmire sounds kewwwlll XDD

"Noona." She corrected softly, taking Akira's hand and leading him towards their dinner. "Noona."

*sniffles*

And no, I'm not PMS-ing. It's your writing. <333