Huh. I like how this is tilted towards Klaus' point of view, and he is almost more uncomfortable with the changes than Dorian. It's a great snap-shot scene -- tells us a lot in a few words.
Did you mean to leave that last sentence in the first paragraph uncapitalized?
It took me lots of puttering around to realise it, but if you're signed into livejournal and look at the actual post itself, there should be a little blue pencil at the top next to the 'memories' heart. That will let you edit the entry that you posted in a community.
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Did you mean to leave that last sentence in the first paragraph uncapitalized?
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(Sorry if you knew this already!)
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