Diversions, Ch2

[caithion]

Diversions Ch. 2 [Edit: Story down for a year, as it has been placed in the Iron and Silk fanzine.]
In which Dorian takes an unexpected dive and Klaus gets a fetish for bony ankles.

I have a question for any readers. My lovely and talented beta is always right, so I'll probably end up changing it, but I wondered what you thought of all the Glorias

Comments

[surexit]

Gah, this was again so good - well-written, and I like the way the relationship is building.

[caithion]

Thank you! I'm so glad.

[ozsaur]

Wow, this was exciting. Looking forward to the next chapter.

As for the Glorias-- using Dorian's title would be a distancing mechanism for Klaus. Perhaps when they become more intimate, Klaus will start using his first name.

[caithion]

Great, that's along the lines of what I was thinking. Thanks so much!

[yavannauk]

I love the way the plot is developing here.

Personally, I found myself tending to mentally change the Glorias to Eroica.

[caithion]

Hm, so do you think "Eroica" would flow better? No having to do mini-translations?

[yavannauk]

For me, yes, but that's a purely personal thing.

[sensine]

This is so exciting! I can't wait for the next part.
About the name - I think Gloria fits with Eberbach, although my mind adds 'it's Eroica' quite unconsciously :-)

[caithion]

Thanks so much! I really appreciate it!

[dessieoctavia]

I think the "Glorias" are fine, especially since Klaus is no longer "Major".

And this is developing nicely, and if they don't end up in bed together I WILL find you. ;-)

[caithion]

*eep!* XD Understood! And thanks!