Diversions, Ch2
Diversions Ch. 2 [Edit: Story down for a year, as it has been placed in the Iron and Silk fanzine.]
In which Dorian takes an unexpected dive and Klaus gets a fetish for bony ankles.
I have a question for any readers. My lovely and talented beta is always right, so I'll probably end up changing it, but I wondered what you thought of all the Glorias. I have a long and complicated explanation for it, but if I have to use the explanation then it obviously isn't working. Does it make you feel like breaking into song every time you read it? Remind you of bad show tunes? Should I just stick with Dorian or something else?
(As always, thank you, thank you to jamjar.)
In which Dorian takes an unexpected dive and Klaus gets a fetish for bony ankles.
I have a question for any readers. My lovely and talented beta is always right, so I'll probably end up changing it, but I wondered what you thought of all the Glorias. I have a long and complicated explanation for it, but if I have to use the explanation then it obviously isn't working. Does it make you feel like breaking into song every time you read it? Remind you of bad show tunes? Should I just stick with Dorian or something else?
(As always, thank you, thank you to jamjar.)