Okay well first off, I'm a total sucker for Sarah/Charley. Come to think of it, I'm a sucker for Sarah/Derek and Sarah/Kyle too. LOL. But they're all very different :P
Anyway, I loved this. I had a hard time imagining Sarah drinking brandy, but being a little drunk was definitely a good way to get her to open up a little. And I really like how you explained why Charley had never asked about those scars. That's something I've often wondered - what did she tell him? You worked that out nicely in a way I would've never thought of.
Charley took her nearest hand all in a rush, and ran the tip of her finger over a ridge just behind his left ear. “I fell off the swing set in elementary school.”
I like the way you've got Charley sort of coaxing her by sharing his own scars. That was nicer than just having him convince her through conversation.
When he saw her squint from not being able to see anything, Charley grasped her hand once again and ran it around the edge of the very old scrape. It really couldn’t be seen, but one could still
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I had a hard time imagining Sarah drinking brandy...
*snickers* Sorry, I was rifling through the liquor cabinet for that one. I saw Charley shove the six pack in the fridge in the ep, decided that would NOT be enough to get them trashed, and just went looking for booze that I thought Charley might have on hand either for cooking or drinking and landed in the cabinet downstairs. Honey wine? No. Raspberry liquor? Like hell. Brandy? That sounds reasonable. And it felt like less of a cop out then whiskey... cause everyone always says whiskey. XD
And I really like how you explained why Charley had never asked about those scars. That's something I've often wondered - what did she tell him? You worked that out nicely in a way I would've never thought of.
Awww, thank you! I'd been thinking long and hard on that cause the bunnies are chewing up the cuffs of my pants about how on earth these two would co-exist for 6 months. Glad much you liked. ^_~
That was nicer than just having him convince her through conversation.COULD Sarah be
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Anyway, I loved this. I had a hard time imagining Sarah drinking brandy, but being a little drunk was definitely a good way to get her to open up a little. And I really like how you explained why Charley had never asked about those scars. That's something I've often wondered - what did she tell him? You worked that out nicely in a way I would've never thought of.
Charley took her nearest hand all in a rush, and ran the tip of her finger over a ridge just behind his left ear. “I fell off the swing set in elementary school.”
I like the way you've got Charley sort of coaxing her by sharing his own scars. That was nicer than just having him convince her through conversation.
When he saw her squint from not being able to see anything, Charley grasped her hand once again and ran it around the edge of the very old scrape. It really couldn’t be seen, but one could still ( ... )
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*snickers* Sorry, I was rifling through the liquor cabinet for that one. I saw Charley shove the six pack in the fridge in the ep, decided that would NOT be enough to get them trashed, and just went looking for booze that I thought Charley might have on hand either for cooking or drinking and landed in the cabinet downstairs. Honey wine? No. Raspberry liquor? Like hell. Brandy? That sounds reasonable. And it felt like less of a cop out then whiskey... cause everyone always says whiskey. XD
And I really like how you explained why Charley had never asked about those scars. That's something I've often wondered - what did she tell him? You worked that out nicely in a way I would've never thought of.
Awww, thank you! I'd been thinking long and hard on that cause the bunnies are chewing up the cuffs of my pants about how on earth these two would co-exist for 6 months. Glad much you liked. ^_~
That was nicer than just having him convince her through conversation.COULD Sarah be ( ... )
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