She Is Love (Stefan/Elena) NC-17-Part 1lit_chick08March 31 2011, 20:01:21 UTC
The first time they make love, Stefan is terrified.
It has been so long since he has made love to a human girl, and this is not just any girl. This is Elena. This is the one girl in the entire world who should not love him; all he has brought to her life is chaos and heartbreak and death, stripping her of her innocence and leaving in its place a heavy heart burdened down with the weight of his secrets
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She Is Love (Stefan/Elena) NC-17-Part 2lit_chick08March 31 2011, 20:01:54 UTC
She wants to explore his body, slowing down the breakneck speed of their coupling, and Stefan is grateful for the opportunity to gather his control. Elena touches him light, trying to gauge his reaction, the tip of her tongue tracing the defining lines of muscle. When she takes him into the scorching warmth of her mouth, Stefan grasps her hair and moans; when she chuckles around him, he urges her off, rolling her onto her back and declaring it is her turn.
The taste of her on his tongue reminds him of his first taste of blood; it is life-altering, a hunger that will never be sated and a taste which he will never be able to replicate. He would gladly spend the rest of his life here, indulging in the feast only he can inspire, keeping Elena so satisfied and boneless she will never want to leave his bed.
When he is finally sheathed inside of her, Stefan knows he is home. He stopped believing in fate long ago but maybe this is proof - she is proof - that all of the pain which has plagued him through his unnaturally long life is
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Re: She Is Love (Stefan/Elena) NC-17-Part 2starsimpulseApril 1 2011, 03:39:05 UTC
lol, i will never be done flailing at you apparently. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. sometimes stefan and elena just have the best sex is all. i'm just saying, THE WORLD NEEDS MOAR STEFAN/ELENA PORN, and this is perfect. stefan's feeaaaaar, his deja vu, and like my favorite part about this (besides the achingly sweet "what do you like?" "anything you do." exchange) is that you write a stefan with lovers, like not just people he's sleep with, but actual lovers. i always forget that, but then i'm like, "it's been 150 years, of course he would." and i love that about him so much. also, this whole thing. &hearts
Re: She Is Love (Stefan/Elena) NC-17-Part 2scorpiod1April 1 2011, 09:54:44 UTC
I love this! I love the first line, it captures Stefan perfectly and the entire fic is so lovely and sensual. And I love how you write the afterglow, "drunk on the scent of them." This whole made me smile so much (also, NC-17 Stefan/Elena, YES. There is not enough in the world).
Re: Not Your DamselcassiehayesMarch 31 2011, 23:03:06 UTC
BAMF ELENA FTW. Oh my god, seriously, though, this is awesome, you capture Elena so well, how she's so brave, always wanting to protect the people she loves, not wanting them to feel like they have to protect her, and the imagery of her and Stefan fighting their foes together, just, so much love.
Re: Not Your Damselscorpiod1April 1 2011, 10:01:55 UTC
Ommmggg, this is my Elena forever. You just have her down perfectly, because Elena gets shit done and does not back down. And this is how she would think, THIS IS HER THOUGHT PROCESS, she will fight for her loved ones, she will fight for what's hers, for her boyfriend. I love the line, "slay this Katherine-dragon," that's just perfect.
And I love so much of this, the description of Stefan's smile launching a thousand ships, that she goes after the dragon while her beloved goes at it from another angle (BECAUSE THEY ARE PARTNERS), "her offering," at the end and the very intimate imagery of Elena's hand in Stefan's hair as she gives him her hand. This whole thing is lovely <33333
Re: Not Your Damselhysteria_3cedApril 3 2011, 23:16:18 UTC
I love the repetition and imagery in this, especially the picture of Elena striking from the left with Stefan on the right. That really is them, the type of partnership they have.
She’s the girl whose home is found in green eyes and brown hair and a smile that is capable of launching a thousand ships on its own. Yes, yes, yes. This is just absolutely perfect; I love it so hard.
For someone who is writing S/E for the first time, you do it so wonderfully well. Thanks for sharing this!
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It has been so long since he has made love to a human girl, and this is not just any girl. This is Elena. This is the one girl in the entire world who should not love him; all he has brought to her life is chaos and heartbreak and death, stripping her of her innocence and leaving in its place a heavy heart burdened down with the weight of his secrets ( ... )
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The taste of her on his tongue reminds him of his first taste of blood; it is life-altering, a hunger that will never be sated and a taste which he will never be able to replicate. He would gladly spend the rest of his life here, indulging in the feast only he can inspire, keeping Elena so satisfied and boneless she will never want to leave his bed.
When he is finally sheathed inside of her, Stefan knows he is home. He stopped believing in fate long ago but maybe this is proof - she is proof - that all of the pain which has plagued him through his unnaturally long life is ( ... )
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And I totally agree. There needs to be more NC-17 Stefan/Elena.
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And I love so much of this, the description of Stefan's smile launching a thousand ships, that she goes after the dragon while her beloved goes at it from another angle (BECAUSE THEY ARE PARTNERS), "her offering," at the end and the very intimate imagery of Elena's hand in Stefan's hair as she gives him her hand. This whole thing is lovely <33333
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Thanks so much-I'm glad you enjoyed my first foray into Stelena fic.
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She’s the girl whose home is found in green eyes and brown hair and a smile that is capable of launching a thousand ships on its own.
Yes, yes, yes. This is just absolutely perfect; I love it so hard.
For someone who is writing S/E for the first time, you do it so wonderfully well. Thanks for sharing this!
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