Genesis (Katherine/Elena/Stefan/Damon) NC-17-Part 1lit_chick08April 3 2011, 20:22:59 UTC
"You're more like Katherine than you'd like to admit. It's only a matter of time until you say yes."
Damon's words echo in Elena's mind as she tosses and turns in bed, struggling under the weight of his words, a twisted mess of pronouncement, insult, enticement, and prediction. Elena was certain Damon had learned his tone from the serpent which tempted Eve; Elena was equally certain succumbing to the temptation would be just as world altering.
She makes a list of the 10,000 reasons she can never do what Damon is suggesting, each another sign on the highway to hell. But there is only one reason for her to succumb, four words flashing in her brain in mile-high neon letters.
Because I want to.The first time Elena saw Damon's bed, she had wondered how many people could fit in it, a bit of idle curiosity to break up the horror of the vampire dying in his sheets. She had never expected an actual answer
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Re: Genesis (Katherine/Elena/Stefan/Damon) NC-17-Part 2lit_chick08April 3 2011, 20:23:35 UTC
Elena has imagined sex with Damon before but in her mind, it was never like this, her pussy soaked from Stefan, his lips tasting of Katherine. She hates it is not sweet and romantic but she also knew it could never be sweet and romantic, not with Damon, not with all that has happened between them
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Re: Genesis (Katherine/Elena/Stefan/Damon) NC-17-Part 2cassiehayesApril 3 2011, 20:30:57 UTC
Holy... everything... unf, I can't even... I love this OT4 so much and you captured the screwed-up-ness of it and the hotness of it so well, and Elena not being ashamed - being ashamed that she is not ashamed, and Katherine wanting Elena, and the imagery in the first bit with Elena running over everything in her head, and FAVORITE LINE, I have to say, Katherine's "But what a way to go." Just... asljdsjdsljsldjs. Yes. Yes.
Re: Genesis (Katherine/Elena/Stefan/Damon) NC-17-Part 2tangled6April 7 2011, 02:18:30 UTC
Phenomenal! I was worried how this would go since since I personally find that writing this foursome has to be done delicately but you blew me away. I think you had all of their reactions down pat!
Re: Genesis (Katherine/Elena/Stefan/Damon) NC-17-Part 2starsimpulseApril 12 2011, 06:34:29 UTC
YOU WILL NEVER BE RID OF ME. DEAL WITH IT.
i commend you so much on this. i didn't think it could be done, tbh. it was SUCH a good choice to not only have this all happen because of elena (only way it could happen, tbh) but having katherine doing this because she wants elena, and not the salvatores. i honestly feel like that's the only way this foursome would ever, ever work. my biggest beef with this foursome is that i couldn't imagine a situation where katherine and elena share the boys, like it just does not compute. there are so many things in that situation that would never, ever happen, and as much as i desperately ship this, i couldn't wrap my mind around it actually happening, BUT THIS. THIS IS PERFECT
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Damon's words echo in Elena's mind as she tosses and turns in bed, struggling under the weight of his words, a twisted mess of pronouncement, insult, enticement, and prediction. Elena was certain Damon had learned his tone from the serpent which tempted Eve; Elena was equally certain succumbing to the temptation would be just as world altering.
She makes a list of the 10,000 reasons she can never do what Damon is suggesting, each another sign on the highway to hell. But there is only one reason for her to succumb, four words flashing in her brain in mile-high neon letters.
Because I want to.The first time Elena saw Damon's bed, she had wondered how many people could fit in it, a bit of idle curiosity to break up the horror of the vampire dying in his sheets. She had never expected an actual answer ( ... )
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I've never written the four of them before so I was really nervous about it. I'm glad it seemed in character.
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i commend you so much on this. i didn't think it could be done, tbh. it was SUCH a good choice to not only have this all happen because of elena (only way it could happen, tbh) but having katherine doing this because she wants elena, and not the salvatores. i honestly feel like that's the only way this foursome would ever, ever work. my biggest beef with this foursome is that i couldn't imagine a situation where katherine and elena share the boys, like it just does not compute. there are so many things in that situation that would never, ever happen, and as much as i desperately ship this, i couldn't wrap my mind around it actually happening, BUT THIS. THIS IS PERFECT ( ... )
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