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casi_casi

traces, part four.

Sep 12, 2010 11:44

Title: Traces
Part: 4 of 10
Characters: David Beckham, Martín Cáceres, Fabio Cannavaro, Iker Casillas, Royston Drenthe, Julien Faubert, Fernando Gago, Raúl González, Pep Guardiola, Thierry Henry, Guti Hernández, Xavi Hernández, Gonzalo Higuaín, Andrés Iniesta, Bojan Krkić, Lionel Messi, Ruud van Nistelrooy, Gerard Piqué, Carles Puyol, Sergio Ramos ( Read more... )

andrés iniesta, ruud van nistelrooy, traces, iker casillas, michel salgado, lionel messi, raúl, david beckham, carles puyol, guti, miguel torres, royston drenthe, fernando gago, gerard piqué, xavi hernández, gonzalo higuaín, fabio cannavaro, bojan krkić, rubén de la red, fic, martín cáceres, thierry henry, sergio ramos, julien faubert, pep guardiola

Comments 15

txorakeriak September 22 2010, 16:58:12 UTC

OMG, I'm really running out of things to say about this gorgeous, gorgeous fic! The bit about Thierry and Bojan... GUH! And I love the intrigue about Rubén! I could ask a million questions about him and his relationship to Sergio and everything, but I won't because that would spoil the fun of finding out myself. And all that business about the school is so intriguing, too! I'm not sure how you managed to get into my head, but I'm not complaining because OMG, I love secret societies that turn into something more (have you ever read Le pendu de Saint-Pholien by Georges Simenon, by the way?), and I can't express properly how much I love this. The way they're all connected somehow, even opposing politicians... AH, what a delight it is to read this! And I also love how everything gets a bit clearer with every chapter but how at the same time newly introduced characters get a couple of scenes behind the smoke curtain. One of the main things about writing crime fiction is to never let the reader think they know everything, and you're doing ( ... )

casi_casi September 23 2010, 01:50:13 UTC

If you're running out of things to say, don't push yourself on my account! Just knowing that you're still enjoying this, four chapters in, is so indescribably gratifying. I guess with chaptered fics, you always worry that readers will lose interest, and it's beyond nice to know that you're not. :)

Ha, I don't know how I managed to get into your head, but I'm glad I did! Secret societies are awesome. And they really do make the perfect setting for a murder mystery.

have you ever read Le pendu de Saint-Pholien by Georges Simenon, by the way?
I haven't, no. What's it about?

Thank you again and again and again. Your comments have made me smile so wide. You totally do deserve a ten-part murder mystery, Bill. ♥

I've posted the fifth part. Halfway through, woo.

elisa88 November 4 2010, 00:51:37 UTC

oooh, an old society they all make part of?? that's awesome!

I really dislike Henry.. at least so far. and it was nice to see a little into Iker's and David's past =) it's sad to know he's dead though... or even worst that a 'friend' killed him.
*sigh*

this is soooooo good!