traces, part four.

[casi_casi]

Title: Traces
Part: 4 of 10
Characters: David Beckham, Martín Cáceres, Fabio Cannavaro, Iker Casillas, Royston Drenthe, Julien Faubert, Fernando Gago, Raúl González, Pep Guardiola, Thierry Henry, Guti Hernández, Xavi Hernández, Gonzalo Higuaín, Andrés Iniesta, Bojan Krkić, Lionel Messi, Ruud van Nistelrooy, Gerard Piqué, Carles Puyol, Sergio Ramos

Comments

[roses_and_stuff]

I always look forward to updates for your fic. The interactions between characters are too awesome to explain and I especially like how the mystery has me guessing all over the place. Raul and Guti are amazingly epic with their conversations~! There are so many layers to your fic and yet it all comes together; it's just awesome. <3 Thank you for writing this amazingly epic piece of awesome.

[casi_casi]

Oh, thank you very much! I'm so, so glad to hear how much you're enjoying this. It means the world to me. :)

[tonstant_weader]

So much to love about this chapter (as usual)! Your vivid description of Thierry's tactics both in theory, and in practice with Bojan never fail to amaze me. The scene with Iker and David was so natural it felt legitimately awkward/tense and yet I'm kind of hoping for more. I'm getting interested in the Oxley intrigue with a loose-canon Pep in its own right, it feels like a possible pivotal point although I don't know how. Although I feel at this point in the plot line you're giving me some more information, scenes like with Ruud and Gerard still lead to some more questions and suspense. And of course it was worth the wait for Raul and Guti (and Xavi who showed so much personality for such a short appearance) who are starting to put things together. Can't wait to see what will happen when they start investigating deeper!

[casi_casi]

Ohh, thank you so much for this wonderful feedback. I know that it probably sounds meaningless, but I do really cherish these types of comments because they give me so much for work off of. I'm just so glad you liked the chapter, and I hope you like the next one when it comes around. ♥

[tonstant_weader]

No, thank YOU for being an imaginative writer! As long as you keep writing well, I'll keep on commenting about it. And I can't wait for the next one!! :D

[casi_casi]

You're lovely. ♥

[eileenyx]

Well, hot damn. ♥ Brass Union as a secret society, oh my

[casi_casi]

Oh, your praise is like honey and I just don't deserve it. You're so, so kind. Thank you.

I can't even explain how glad I am that you liked this chapter, especially the Thierry/Bojan stuff, because they're so delicious to write, and it's great to hear that they're good to read as well.

I know you're determined to convince me that you miss the point all the time, but what you said about the Thierry/Bojan pillow talk scene and Iker's awkwardness in the flashback is so gratifyingly on point.

I'm not going to answer any of your questions (though I suspect they're most rhetorical), because I'm hoping subsequent chapters will do that. :)

Yes, Xavi's midget quip! Wow, I'd forgotten about it. He's such a pixie, I adore him.

And I adore you. Thank you again. Words cannot express my appreciation. ♥

[casi_casi]

Eurghorghghdkdhf HTML hates me.

[kitty69lover]

i decided to comment as i read this time, lol. just so there wouldn't be things i forget to mention

[casi_casi]

Oh, please don't apologise for your comment! Thank you so, so, so much for it; it really means the world to see how much you've enjoyed this chapter! And your feedback is so helpful and lovely. I'm a very lucky writer. ♥

I'm so glad you're liking Thierry and Bojan and not-so-perfect Pep and everything. I'm having such a ball with those characters, and so it's great to read comments like yours.

i'm guessing you've finished writing the story already
Oh, I'm a really slow writer, so it's not all written yet, no. BUT it is all very intricately planned out, section by section!

Thank you again, so much.

[casi_casi]

Depeche Mode are creepily perfect in general. :)

Ah, your comment was so wonderful to read. I'm so glad that you're still finding this intriguing and getting something new from the characters. Your continued encouragement is very much appreciated! Thank you endlessly. ♥