this year's love.

[casi_casi]

I'm not entirely happy with this, but perhaps someone out there will like it.

Title: This Year's Love
Pairing: Daniel Agger / Fernando Torres
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Lies.
Notes: Title taken from the David Gray song.
Feedback > life. Constructive criticism is very welcome.

Comments

[casi_casi]

Oh, thanks so much! That's really lovely to hear. I really appreciate the comment. :)

[mikaylex]

That was really sweet. I loved the comfortable closeness the two of them share and how well they read each other.

One tiny thing, would you consider making your layout a little easier to read? Grey on white with such a small font is a little uncomfortable to look at. I ended up copying and pasting it into word.

[mikaylex]

Oh wait, I just remembered that there is an option to look at other journals in my own style. Don't worry about it then. :)

And I meant to say this earlier but I love this line.

The breakfasts, lunches and dinners are the metronome, and their love plays along.

It's really beautiful.

[casi_casi]

I changed the font, anyway; I've got to admit, I was finding a little hard to read, too. Though I seem quite attached to the grey.

Thank you for reading and for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this. :)

[vicky86x]

don`t know how you can`t be entirely happy with this one? ;) I really enjoyed reading it. the routine between Dan and Fernando the optimism for the new season. I really like it, so thanks for sharing :)

[casi_casi]

I don't know; something about it irked me! But I'm so glad to see that you enjoyed it. Thanks very much for commenting!

[bossbadger]

Just gorgeous. I love the way you write.

[casi_casi]

Thank you so much! :)

[winter_solstice]

They're just so perfect together. :D

[casi_casi]

:) Thank you for reading!