traces, part one.

[casi_casi]

Title: Traces
Part: 1 of 10
Characters: David Beckham, Martín Cáceres, Fabio Cannavaro, Iker Casillas, Royston Drenthe, Julien Faubert, Fernando Gago, Raúl González, Pep Guardiola, Thierry Henry, Guti Hernández, Xavi Hernández, Gonzalo Higuaín, Andrés Iniesta, Bojan Krkić, Lionel Messi, Ruud van Nistelrooy, Gerard Piqué, Carles Puyol, Sergio Ramos

Comments

[eileenyx]

Endless flailing. This promises to be glorious, like everything else you write. An abundance of ♥.

Puyi! Xavi! Guti! I am immediately in love.

I must friend you. I don't write football-related fiction and I'm pretty boring, but hopefully an add back?

[casi_casi]

I have an abundance of love for you. Obviously adding you back because you're already one of the kindest people I've ever met. ♥.

Thank you so much! I really, really hope you end up liking the completed whole. Thank you for reading and commenting and I'll update as soon as I can.

[eileenyx]

Holy shit

[casi_casi]

Ohhhhh, you slay me. I don't deserve such a long, generous comment. (Never apologise for writing long comments, by the way; I'm pretty sure I speak on behalf of all writers when I say that I love them.) Thank you so much, again. This kind of feedback on a first chapter is immeasurably encouraging (understatement of my life).

You have not missed the point at all! Your comment is totally accurate and insightful, and you've picked up on little details and overall moods that I hoped so much that you would. What you said about Bojan's corruption and Canna's heartbreak is exactly what I was hoping readers would get from it, and I'm beyond delighted that you did. This kind of really specific feedback is an absolute goldmine from my point of view. You've given me so much to work with here, and I can do nothing but say thank you, thank you, thank you, over and over

[txorakeriak]

OH MY GOD, I HAVEN'T EVEN READ THIS YET (a friend will come over in about five minutes *argh*), BUT OH MY GOD, I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.

SO SO SO MUCH.

Thank you for this, I'm sure it's brilliant and I'll love it to bits and worship you even more after having read it (even though right now I'm not quite sure how that is actually possible).

*MWAH*

[txorakeriak]

Okay, I've read it now and I don't even know what to say. I'm absolutely speechless. The first paragraph already sucked me into the story had had me hooked completely, and I loved all those different storylines and the intriguing characters. The roles you chose for them fit perfectly, especially Raúl as the DCI, Guti as his right hand, and Gonzalo as his (slightly chaotic) assistant are brilliant, the Thierry/Bojan bit was awesome, the mystery about Beckham (who has suddenly become a young boy? XD) and Iker and Fabio and Carles and the gun boxes intrigued me, and also I guess I won't be able to stop wondering about who David's visitor is until you post the next update. Which I hope will be soon! I might not get a lot of the plot yet, but that's definitely a good thing because it adds to the intrigue - and murder mysteries wouldn't be murder mysteries without the mystery, right

[jungle_moon]

God..I am intrigue by this..and absolutely confuse as what is it all about..but your (little) explanation of sort here really helped me out with knowing the characters and understanding the story! Thank you very much! XD

[casi_casi]

Ohhhhh Bill, I love you! Your first comment made me smile so much. I hope you had fun with your friend

[pas_un_elephant]

*bounces in anticipation*

I'm sort of confused by what's going on right now, but in a good way, lol.

Very intriguing!

[casi_casi]

Ah, thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm hoping it'll become a little clearer in the next part. :)

[roses_and_stuff]

You've got me so intrigued! I don't usually read AU stuff but I'm going to be looking forward for your updates for this one. :)

[casi_casi]

Oh, thank you so much for taking a chance on this fic (considering you don't normally read AU)! I really appreciate your comment, and I hope you end up enjoying the series. :)

[kitty69lover]

this is absolutely intriguing. it's so promising and i love the writing.

need more. <3

[casi_casi]

Oh, thank you so much! That's such a lovely comment. I will update in the coming days, and I hope you enjoy it. ♥