enough.

Jun 05, 2009 15:00

Title: Enough
Pairing: David Silva / David Villa
Rating: R (a little sex and language).
Disclaimer: Imagination - it's a beautiful thing, no?
Notes: For
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casi_casi June 6 2009, 08:27:51 UTC
Thank you so much for that lovely comment! I'm really glad to hear that you liked it. :)

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amaelamin_ June 5 2009, 07:08:30 UTC
i love this, how it's not all lovey-dovey and perfect, but complicated and tense and there're misunderstandings.

They turn away complication, and obligation, content with the threads of understanding that link them, and Villa's surprise makes way for a constant expectation that Silva will always be there, in some form or another.

realistic, and beautifully written. i'm adding this to my memories ♥

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casi_casi June 6 2009, 08:29:15 UTC
Thank you so, so much. I'm so glad you like the complications, and that you found it realistic. That's really great to hear from a writer's perspective. ♥

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dfotw June 5 2009, 07:54:57 UTC
Oh, what a beautiful fic! I love the insight into Villa's feelings and Silva is so confused and insecure... it's a lovely way to depict a complex, imperfect relationship!

this, in its simplicity and deceptive ease, is enough.

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casi_casi June 6 2009, 08:29:58 UTC
Thanks very much! I'm so glad you liked the characterisation and the way I wrote the relationship. :)

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casi_casi June 6 2009, 08:30:38 UTC
Thanks, your comment is much appreciated! I'm glad you liked Villa in particular. :)

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casi_casi June 6 2009, 08:43:32 UTC
Ha, thanks! It is indeed rather adorable. drbillbongo, who made it, is obviously a genius.

I like yours, too. ;)

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casi_casi June 6 2009, 08:31:47 UTC
Wow, thank you so much! That is very high praise indeed, and I am flattered. I'm so glad to hear that you liked the characters and the little details, because that's stuff that's always worrying for a writer, and to hear that you've gotten them right is always very pleasing. :)

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