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[casi_casi]

Title: Enough
Pairing: David Silva / David Villa
Rating: R (a little sex and language).
Disclaimer: Imagination - it's a beautiful thing, no?
Notes: For

Comments

[casi_casi]

Gosh, thanks so much, what lovely feedback. Thanks in particular for the comment on stereotypes, because I was worried about that. And I'm really glad that you felt the tension, because that's what I was going for! Thanks again. ♥

[casi_casi]

Thanks very much, I'm so glad you liked it! It's always flattering to hear that your writing is different, so I really appreciate that. :)

[kat_lys]

Wow. Just wow. Thank you SO much for writing this, it was fantastic. The story, but more than anything, your style and the atmosphere you created. I'm going to try to leave you a decent feedback but my english always let me down when I try to express all the feelings and impressions that are coming through my head after such a wonderful read. (I'm sorry I quoted half of the fic!)

Two, maybe three seconds pass before Silva looks away.
Two, maybe three seconds pass before he looks back.
Villa smirks as his arrogance finds him again, and hours later, he lifts himself off his sofa to let Silva in.
This part during the training, with Villa's thoughts and control over Silva, is amazing.

"I've got you wrapped around my little finger, haven't I?" [...]
"Your eloquence collapses when you're around me. Have you noticed that?" Smug. Smug. Smug.
Villa's power on Silva and his counsciouness of his power is exhilarating.

He wishes he hadn't succeeded when Villa aggressively forces Silva's hand up against the headboard of his bed, pushing into

[casi_casi]

Holy crap, what an amazing comment! I'm speechless; no idea what I can say to such generous feedback. (And your English is perfect!)

I'm so, so delighted that you liked this fic; I was especially nervous about it because it was for you. *shuffles feet* I know how much you love this pairing, so it was sort of like extra motivation to try and write them as attentively as possible!

It's great to hear that you liked the style/atmosphere, and the bits that you picked out were my favourite bits as well. :) I was always very conscious of and worried about tension and build-up, so the fact that you pointed that out is really, really gratifying. Thanks so much again for the gorgeous comment. Your observations were so great to read from a writer's point of view, and I'm just so, so pleased that you enjoyed this.

PS: I LOVE YOUR ICON OMG.

[bluxsam]

You are a genious.
This is a wonderful fic, not only the story but your style.
I love how they "fight" against each other while needing each other more than they admit.
Thanks for posting.

[casi_casi]

Thank you so much, that's a really lovely comment! I'm delighted that you liked this. :)

[txorakeriak]

Wow, this is one fantastic piece of writing

[casi_casi]

Ohhhh my god. Your feedback. Lost for words. Lost. For. Words.

Thank you so, so much! You flatter me, you really do. I don't even know how to begin replying to this, but I shall try. :)

pretends he just needs him for the basics (food and sex) because that's as much as he's comfortable admitting to himself
Yesyes, that's exactly what I was trying to say, and I'm so glad you got that.

I guess it's his realistic, pragmatic (and sometimes stoic) nature that makes him think he can't have any more than this with Villa, which explains to me why he's trying to distance himself from him.
And this! That fear of getting too close, just in case Villa doesn't want anything more...

I'm just so thrilled that you enjoyed the characterisation. I tried my hardest to make them multidimensional and unpredictable (but not incongruous), so to hear that you were surprised by the turns the story took is just everything I could have hoped for. :)

Appears twice in the story, with exactly the same wording. It fits perfectly in the first case, so I assume