Comments | carylic: FIC: On His Shoulder

carylic

FIC: On His Shoulder

Jul 24, 2005 19:55

Disclaimer: Not mine (and fuck you, Australia, they're of age too :P)

On His Shoulder

Pairing: Bitch, please ...
Rating: Er ... Rish? NC-17ish? Something ...

One shot.

Notes: Well, true to my form I wrote 90% of it about 2 months ago and yet still managed to be like two days late for lunesque's birthday, so ... *belated, deflated fanfare* happy ( Read more... )

bday_fic, fic, moris_bday

Comments 27

abremaline July 24 2005, 11:00:37 UTC

Worth every second I've been waiting for you to post this. :)

Very sweet. Love it. Well done.

carylic July 24 2005, 11:29:36 UTC

Gee, subtle much about how long it takes me to write ... :P

Glad you like ... hopefully not too sweet though.

abremaline July 24 2005, 11:36:43 UTC

subtlety is my specialty. :)

kiyoshi_tano_3 July 24 2005, 15:42:20 UTC

OMG! i loved this story so much!

carylic July 24 2005, 22:42:40 UTC

Really? Well then I'm glad, I write to make people like after all :D

red_rahl July 24 2005, 19:14:19 UTC

I love everything about this story! I love how you set it up, how I wasn't sure if Harry was actually married to someone else or not, how the details of Draco's past and present filtered through as the story went on. I seriously can rave on and on but please know that this story really moved me deeply and your writing always makes me so damn happy. *wibbles*

carylic July 24 2005, 22:44:08 UTC

Whoa, um, that's quite humbling actually ... I don't write to 'move people' ... normally I just hope to entertain. But I'm happy that you're happy.

daisy_chan July 24 2005, 22:34:33 UTC

This was wonderful! Thank you so much for writing it. ^^

carylic July 24 2005, 22:46:14 UTC

And thank you for reading it. My world would be pointless without the forgiving readers :D

danbi July 25 2005, 00:09:24 UTC

I really liked the premise here. I didn't completely follow what Draco had done. I know there was a trial but were they together beforehand? I'm a little slow. I'm gonna go ahead and blame that on it being Sunday.

The sex wasn't bad. I like that you included a condom, cause it wasn't too blatant - it was just part of the process.

I like your writing.

Mmmkay, bye.

carylic July 25 2005, 00:13:29 UTC

I don't actually say what Draco had done ... I like leaving that up to the reader. and yeah, they were together beforehand ... though again, I don't go into detail.

Glad you liked it :D