Comments | carylic: FIC: On His Shoulder

carylic

FIC: On His Shoulder

Jul 24, 2005 19:55

Disclaimer: Not mine (and fuck you, Australia, they're of age too :P)

On His Shoulder

Pairing: Bitch, please ...
Rating: Er ... Rish? NC-17ish? Something ...

One shot.

Notes: Well, true to my form I wrote 90% of it about 2 months ago and yet still managed to be like two days late for lunesque's birthday, so ... *belated, deflated fanfare* happy ( Read more... )

bday_fic, fic, moris_bday

Comments 27

turangaleela July 25 2005, 01:21:10 UTC

Excellent. It was a very insightful and moving look into two lovers meeting again after such a long time. Thanks for posting.

carylic July 25 2005, 03:00:14 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

miss_charmed July 25 2005, 09:36:35 UTC

Wow dear, this is really good. I love the atmosphere, and this -

"I hate you more than I love you, I love you more than I want you, I want you more than I need you but I need you more than I hate you."

- i didn't even try to decipher it, but it sounds so beautiful anyway :)

carylic July 25 2005, 09:49:23 UTC

lol, don't look at me ... I rarely know what I'm doing ... glad you liked :D

darth_cabal July 25 2005, 09:39:09 UTC

That was beautiful. Especially the "I hate you more than I love you, I love you more than I want you, I want you more than I need you but I need you more than I hate you..." part

carylic July 25 2005, 09:50:07 UTC

Thank you, yeah that line ... *shrugs* I'm not too sure what made me write it, but hey. Glad you liked.

anonymous July 25 2005, 19:31:03 UTC

I <3 you.

You really had me nearly panicked about the wedding ring though. ^^; *loves*

carylic July 25 2005, 22:21:22 UTC

Fret no longer ... I didn't have the heart to ruin it for them :D

ceares July 26 2005, 00:57:31 UTC

Lovely. Atmospheric and intriguing.

thanks.

carylic July 26 2005, 04:59:37 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked :D