Fic: Conversations

[carolion]

Title: Conversations
Author: x_heterophobic
Pairing: Chris Pine/Zachary Quinto
Rating: PG
POV: Third, Chris-centric.
Summary: "Did you know we have nicknames?"
"Duh, or would you rather go by Zachary all the time?"
"Don't be an ass."
Disclaimer: Do not own, not affiliated with, nor am I speculating anything about Chris Pine or Zachary Quinto, nor do I mean any

Comments

[commanderkari]

Tinny--you meant that, right?--I've never heard that used before. Huh. Coooool, new word.

lol @ asshat. I love that word.

“Apparently I am a GQMF I believe there should be a comma after apparently. [This is the best I can find. Not many mistakes that I see so far.]

I think they may be a bit overdramatic. But it makes it funny. X]

Chris takes the moment to reflect I don't know, the paragraph seems a bit out of place there, a little random. Maybe better toward the beginning, before they get into the nicknames? Could just be me, though. >__>

Zach’s rolling his eyes - he must be, Chris I think that comma would have to be another dash, to make it match. [Atleast, that's what my english teacher always bitched about.]

But other than that, I really didn't see anything else that need to be fixed. [I had to be reallllyy picky to find anything.]
I love their banter, and the ending was cute~

[carolion]

Tinny - it's like when something sounds thin or metallic. :D It's a great word to use when describing phone convos.

1. Fixed.

2. Hopefully fixed. >_> That's one of the paragraphs I added in last minute and when I re-read it I was like "AGH FML" because it didn't flow. I think I segued into it a bit better... I'll do another read through when I get out of the shower. It always helps to take a break and come back to it. ^_^

3. Fixed!

Thank you darling! I like to make the boys a little sillier and sweeter than they probably are for fics, at least for fluffy fics like these. I see what you mean about them being over-dramatic, but I'm glad it's funny (since it's supposed to be, har har har.)

Lol I love the word asshat too. :D

[commanderkari]

because tunes him out he? :]
Flows MUCH better!

I'm always so worried about editing, 'cause I'm always worried I come off badly. Glad I didn't~

lol, it reminds me of this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cVOiTDBDO9U

[commanderkari]

The word asshat, I mean.

[_homesickblues_]

Oh! So, I don't know how I missed this before, but here I am.

Celebrities-lurking-the-Internet stories always make me feel so awkward because I prefer to think that they've never heard of the Internet and are terribly oblivious to the creepy things I use it for.

Anyway, this is really amusing. I greatly enjoyed these lines in particular:
“Dude, I may start answering my phone ‘Captain Fine.’”

“Great Queer Zachary Quinto?” He suggests, snickering at the outraged noises that Zach made from the other end of the line.
“No, but thanks for that."

I also enjoyed when the nicknames got considerably less flattering.

With this sentence: He does take the moment to reflect on how nice it is to hear his friend’s voice, rich and full, though perhaps not quite as clear as it would be in person I would probably just take it out because I think it actually flows better without it.

The ending is quite cute. I like Zach's excuse for not calling.
Write more. :)