Fic: Conversations

[carolion]

Title: Conversations
Author: x_heterophobic
Pairing: Chris Pine/Zachary Quinto
Rating: PG
POV: Third, Chris-centric.
Summary: "Did you know we have nicknames?"
"Duh, or would you rather go by Zachary all the time?"
"Don't be an ass."
Disclaimer: Do not own, not affiliated with, nor am I speculating anything about Chris Pine or Zachary Quinto, nor do I mean any

Comments

[commanderkari]

Tinny--you meant that, right?--I've never heard that used before. Huh. Coooool, new word.

lol @ asshat. I love that word.

“Apparently I am a GQMF I believe there should be a comma after apparently. [This is the best I can find. Not many mistakes that I see so far.]

I think they may be a bit overdramatic. But it makes it funny. X]

Chris takes the moment to reflect I don't know, the paragraph seems a bit out of place there, a little random. Maybe better toward the beginning, before they get into the nicknames? Could just be me, though. >__>

Zach’s rolling his eyes - he must be, Chris I think that comma would have to be another dash, to make it match. [Atleast, that's what my english teacher always bitched about.]

But other than that, I really didn't see anything else that need to be fixed. [I had to be reallllyy picky to find anything.]
I love their banter, and the ending was cute~

[carolion]

Tinny - it's like when something sounds thin or metallic. :D It's a great word to use when describing phone convos.

1. Fixed.

2. Hopefully fixed. >_> That's one of the paragraphs I added in last minute and when I re-read it I was like "AGH FML" because it didn't flow. I think I segued into it a bit better... I'll do another read through when I get out of the shower. It always helps to take a break and come back to it. ^_^

3. Fixed!

Thank you darling! I like to make the boys a little sillier and sweeter than they probably are for fics, at least for fluffy fics like these. I see what you mean about them being over-dramatic, but I'm glad it's funny (since it's supposed to be, har har har.)

Lol I love the word asshat too. :D

[commanderkari]

because tunes him out he? :]
Flows MUCH better!

I'm always so worried about editing, 'cause I'm always worried I come off badly. Glad I didn't~

lol, it reminds me of this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cVOiTDBDO9U

[commanderkari]

The word asshat, I mean.

[carolion]

Ooh, thanks for the catch.

And no you were good. <3

Bwahahahaa comedy. You posted a couple of their videos during party post or something, because I equate them with you now. I love amateur comedy - there's something so pure about it. ;D

[commanderkari]

:]

Okay, good. XD

I love them, they're so funny. Yeah, I posted them during the party post. You should check out the rest of their videos. There are some that aren't that great, but the majority are hilarious.