Comments | carolinecrane: Fic: Skin Poetry (Brotherhood II, Harlan/Marcus, NC17)

carolinecrane

Fic: Skin Poetry (Brotherhood II, Harlan/Marcus, NC17)

Jul 28, 2009 12:44

Title: Skin Poetry
Fandom: Brotherhood II
Pairing: Harlan/Marcus
Rating: NC17
Summary: Harlan isn't a poet, but he likes writing anyway.
A/N: For my kink bingo card. The kink is Writing On Skin (for the wildcard spot), with bonus Humiliation (Private) (sort of), and Object Penetration (Not a Sex Toy), because I can't seem to stick with just one ( Read more... )

fic: bingo, bingo, fic, fic: brotherhood ii, brotherhood

Comments 11

olukemi July 28 2009, 17:58:19 UTC

.............*remembers to breathe. sort of.* GUH.

carolinecrane July 28 2009, 19:00:48 UTC

Ha! Thanks :) These two just bring out the porn, I don't know what it is.

olukemi July 28 2009, 19:04:18 UTC

I think it's the combination of of the animosity/bullying/lust, the secrecy, and the school uniforms. Just...guh. This was so, so hot. ♥!

ruggerdavey July 28 2009, 18:04:08 UTC

Dude! I just! Dude! *fans self*

carolinecrane July 28 2009, 19:01:07 UTC

Why thank you ;)

cinderlily July 28 2009, 20:41:31 UTC

Well, hello there. Oh dear lord. Um... okay. Wait, back to the making sense bit. Hold on...

Wow. Just... hrmm. Wow. I have to tell you that when you started talking about the kink bingo thing I was kind of ... I don't know. Hesitant? Cause I love everything you write, and will read anything that you post even if I don't know the pairing or even the canon but I am a total prude (which you know) and an entire bingo card of fic that I was nervous would make me totally uncomfortable was just a little daunting, you know?

But this? Was really and truly brilliant Caroline. Not in the, "Wow, that's hot" way (Which it is, btw.) but in the way that it is so vivid and real and faithful to the canon that I don't doubt one bit it could have been in the film. You have Harlan, who really is supposed to be a background character and a villain at best, fleshed out and human and you have Marcus true to his own (totally valid) anger at what had happened but still able to go from there and build the relationship with Harlan and... well. Fuck Caroline ( ... )

carolinecrane July 29 2009, 00:34:53 UTC

Honestly, when I signed up for the challenge I was a little hesitant. I mean, I'll write porn, and Lord knows I have done, but I'm pretty vanilla, so a kink challenge? But I signed up *because* it made me uncomfortable, and I thought the challenge might be good for me. So far it's panned out that way, which is nice!

Anyway, thank you for taking a chance and reading these even though they're pretty porny. I am very glad to hear this one worked for you. I do love Harlan and Marcus, and this particular kink was pretty much tailor-made for them.

duckduck July 28 2009, 21:46:20 UTC

Oh, my word. This writing on skin thing is sort of a new kink for me, and this is amazing. Beautiful. Wow.

carolinecrane July 29 2009, 00:32:06 UTC

I am kind of embarrassed to admit that when I saw the Writing On Skin prompt, I was planning to write Touching Evil fic. Then last night it dawned on me, "Dummy, it's *canon* in Brotherhood II". Sometimes I'm slow. I do enjoy this kink, though, so I will possibly revisit it sometime.

spoiledjap July 29 2009, 01:38:11 UTC

God the Harlan/Marcus in my head are even panting along with me! This gave me the good kind of goose bumps.

carolinecrane July 29 2009, 13:31:00 UTC

Ha! Thanks, glad you liked :) They make it so easy to write porn.