Fic: Cover (BWOC, Becky/Lori, NC17)

[carolinecrane]

This took a lot longer than I anticipated, thanks to about a million interruptions (including finding out today that there's a potluck tomorrow at work -- gee, thanks for the notice, people). It's not really what I originally envisioned and therefore is less porny than I promised, but you know how characters do their own thing despite your best

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[exitsign]

Oh. Oh, fuck. Yeah, okay, I... Jesus. Christ. Fuck. Becky/Lori is hot like a thing on fire but, God, this? Is fucking unreal. First off, I love that it's their first time together because, even if it's bad sex, first time sex is insanely frenzied and passionate. I also love that Becky still has some of that crush going on because, seriously, I'm in love with Becky being in love with Lori. I don't even know why it makes me so giddy because I'm in love with Lori being in love with Becky too, it just feels different when it's Becky. I don't know.

I also love that Becky wasn't a virgin to the ways of the girl!sex because it would have been easy to write it that way but much cooler this way and also a lot less embarrassing on her part. Which, really, she's already totally nervous because it's Lori so she didn't need that extra reason to be nervous. And, while we're on the subject of the sex, ohmygodhotandwithpantieson. Guh. Fucking guh. This has to be on of the best, most descriptive sex scenes I have ever read in my life. Just, really,

[carolinecrane]

You know, part of the reason I don't write more femmeslash (aside from the fact that hardly anyone wants to read it and I am, in the end, a comment whore) is that this, for me, is all about titillation. I know why straight girls are always all 'guh' over my guy/guy porn, and while I appreciate it, I don't really get it. But with the naked Becky and Lori? Dear God