Fic: Cover (BWOC, Becky/Lori, NC17)

[carolinecrane]

This took a lot longer than I anticipated, thanks to about a million interruptions (including finding out today that there's a potluck tomorrow at work -- gee, thanks for the notice, people). It's not really what I originally envisioned and therefore is less porny than I promised, but you know how characters do their own thing despite your best

Comments

[carolinecrane]

But your gibberish is always so eloquent. I left the panties on for Jane's sake, I admit, but it's good to know it's a kink for you as well. Okay, it's a kink for me too. We all have good taste in kinks.

The gay porn thing...well, I was going to do more with it, and it probably would have worked better if I'd written this as a stand-alone, but oh well. I'm kind of in love with the idea of Lori watching gay porn, and Lori watching gay porn with Becky is even better. I don't know why that's so hot. It just is.

[carolinecrane]

Thanks for the pimpage. I don't know why more people don't like girlslash, but what can you do.

[ruggerdavey]

Well, the girl on girl thing is not really my thing, but you've really got me liking Becky and Lori. They're really sweet together.

[carolinecrane]

Aw, you know I love my girls, so I appreciate you taking a chance on them.

[spoiledjap]

That was my first femslash, and that was hot. Wow, OMG, Wow.

[carolinecrane]

Thanks, glad you liked : )

[carolinecrane]

They're kind of an unlikely pairing, considering they were only ever in the same scene in that genie episode and I think Becky was unconscious the whole time, but once I start thinking about what happens to both of them after Tommy and Merton pair up and ditch them, it makes sense. Thanks.

[carolinecrane]

Ah, yeah, I can see where people who didn't know the entire universe as it exists in my head might find that one a bit of a downer. But really it's about growth and a young girl kind of finding herself, and then we skip ahead three years to the hot lesbian sex. So it's not really depressing if you're me, but it's also my big experiment with 2nd person POV, and I know not many people enjoy that. Thank you for loving it and pimping it, though. That means a lot.

[rainydaypsycho]

Hey, you can joss yourself all you want, as long as it's as porny hot good as this

[carolinecrane]

Heh. Thanks. I doubt anyone but me remembers the details of "Honey" enough to notice the jossing anyway, but still. It had to be fixed.