FIC: RUNNING THE BREAK (10/10)

Nov 24, 2010 19:10

Title: Running the Break (10/10)
Authors: Surfer Hips Productions (aka dazzling_icer, carolinablu85, and noelleleithe)
Artists: la_fours and noelleleithe
Rating: NC-17 (eventually)

Other Notes and Art Links: In Master Post

I was born when you kissed me. )

fanfic: collaboration, fanfic: au, by: noelleleithe, character: shirtless!noah, fic: running the break, television: atwt, fanfic

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md1347 November 29 2010, 05:03:26 UTC
Great story. Loved it all.

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aimezetmusique November 29 2010, 05:06:20 UTC
That tattoo probably is one of my favorite parts thus far. I love your descriptions of how he's sleeping, the light, all of it. The picture is GORGEOUS and so well done without being too much. Perfect. How many times can I say this? Heart is swellllling ( ... )

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noelleleithe November 30 2010, 17:59:39 UTC
Awww, yay! Glad all the schmoopiness worked. And more crying! Gosh, guess we should've handed out free Kleenex with the story ... :D

They really DO belong together. Period. And hey, writing description is a hell of a lot easier when you have such pretty, pretty boys to describe. ;)

*HUGS YOU EPICALLY OVER AND OVER AGAIN*

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singulair November 29 2010, 10:22:47 UTC
Loved it.

It fascinating, how Noah has changed in Nuke fics. He's become a kind of mixture of old Noah (still shy and adorable), Haken (tattoos) and Jake (more muscular). Great development.

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dancingelf88 November 29 2010, 17:00:12 UTC
WHERE DO I START?!
1. I LOVE THAT NOAH IS A BADASSS WITH THE TATTOOS AND THE SURFING AND THE BIKE RIDING
2. I LOVE NOAH'S SUPPORT SYSTEM. I'm kind of in love with Malia...she's so awesome. Everyone needs a Malia in their life. And Malia/Aaron? OTP FO LIFE
3. Kan= Hawaiian!Holden I loved his presence and his wise old sage-ness mixed with his weed smoking. Just awesome.
4. AND OMG LUKE FINALLY GREW UP! Loved the convo with Holden at the hospital when Holden told him to grow up and figure his shit out for himself.
5. NUKE!sexytimes. Always down for Nuke!sexytimes
6. Them finally, finally getting together and the conversations that followed? Dude I turned to mush like three times.

In case you couldn't tell from my tweets. LOOOOVED THIS ENTIRE THING. It was so worth the wait (SEE WHAT I DID THERE?!). This is definitely one that I'll read over and over again.

...and now I'm going to sleep. <333

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indigo_5 November 29 2010, 20:09:43 UTC
So THIS is what you guys have been talking about! Ha, wow. Over 50K?!? Good gravy! What a phenomenal project. Love to see such great folks working together to create something like this. And what a relief it must be to finally post the dang thing. :P

So! Well. Loved it. Of course. So many parts, but I think my favorite was the image we first get of Noah, in his half-peeled-off wetsuit, all tatted up and pretty. This story had some great visuals in it. Also love the mad dash to the bedroom at the end, and the way they barely made it in the front door before tearing into each other. The sex was, well, damn. All of it. Yum yummy yum yum yum. And love the wonderful romantic happy ending! Oh boys. Of course you are meant for each other, in whatever 'verse you find yourselves in. ♥

Brava, ladies! A job very very well done! \o/

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noelleleithe November 30 2010, 18:00:30 UTC
Hee. That image of Noah was pretty much the impetus for the entire story. Because we are shallow, shallow women. ;)

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