FIC: RUNNING THE BREAK (4/10)

[carolinablu85]

Title: Running the Break (4/10)
Authors: Surfer Hips Productions (aka dazzling_icer, carolinablu85, and noelleleithe)
Artists: la_fours and noelleleithe
Rating: NC-17 (eventually)

Other Notes and Art Links: In Master Post

Comments

[aimezetmusique]

Once more, wonderful descriptions! I know next to nothing about surfing so all those gear and such were perfection...cause I had no idea what they were! :P But once more, I could see the shop, and everything feels so tangible. Sooooo good

[brisync]

Haha the description of stupid tourist Luke in his khaki shorts made me crack up.

I would kill Aaron if he was my brother, and wasn't there to meet me, cause he was hanging out.

Description of Noah KILLS. I want to lick. PLZ.

On for more!

[dancingelf88]

I wanted to wait to get through the whole thing to comment but...

"His eyes made the final trek up his neck to see the man whip his head from side to side"
had me imagining Noah coming out of the water to Willow Smith's "Whip Your Hair". Just thought I would share.

[crownroyal_51]

Wow...the picture you guys painted of "surfer Noah" is sooooo hot. Wow!

I have to admit I was a bit thrown by the 9 months later. I'm a bit anxious to see just how much more has changed with Noah during these 9 months. I hope he's still single!!!

[kelly_ken]

Oh, wow! Noah is all super hot now! Loved Luke's reaction to that! Hee.