innocence is a sin

[stygian_dream]

Title: Innocence is a Sin
Fandom: Vampire Knight
Rating: PG
Genre: Drama and Romance
Pairing(s): Zero Kiryuu / Yuuki Cross-Kuran
Format: Prose
Time/Setting : near the end of chapter 73
Summary : I turn and walk away. "Innocence is a sin. It's time to stop sinning, princess."

Comments

[diapadme]

Baah, this is tragic. Really, really tragic and I've got the feeling that something like that might happen in the next chapter. Boohoo.
Anyway, lovely writing, this was really intense!

[stygian_dream]

I honestly figure that the author is unfolding the story according to how she's always planned it, unlike most people that think she's lost or just doing this for fan-service. The way the author wrote it is very important. Yuuki's thoughts are (not word-for-word, but), 'Is this how we've always been, Zero? Is this how we move forward, by hurting one another?' This shows that Yuuki wants to move forward with Zero, and I think she might even know the consequences of doing this. But, perhaps not... she's lost right now.

Buuut, aside from all that, I really hope that the next chapter has something more with the two of them... not like something I've written, of course. :3

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. <33333

[diapadme]

Ah well, you know. I'll be honest, I sometimes get the feeling Hino does stuff with the characters for pure fanservice's sake. And then again, it would be a shame if she did that. I really hope she's turning this in the direction she has planned to from the very beginning, just like you said. That quote especially indicates it.
Also, you're welcome! Keep them coming!

[stygian_dream]

I know what you mean. :/ It could really be that way, but I personally wouldn't think she'd let her story be determined like that. She made it, she dreamed up all these characters... it's her baby. I'd be very protective and true to each and every character. They become like real people to a writer. You don't want them to suffer indefinitely, or die thinking they haven't fulfilled their purpose.

Hopefully, I'll have some more Zero/Yuuki fan fiction up soon. :3

[damned_zero]

Beautiful but so sad, I love your writing and I think you write from Zero's p.o.v very well considering he is one of those characters that is almost unreadable, but you right from him in such a believable, in character way :) Great job I hope to see more fanfictions from you :D

[stygian_dream]

Thank you!!!!! -glomp- I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. :3

[isilen]

Ohhh! it's its... *her 3some heart is in joy* Beatiful and very on canon. A great resume-introspective of last manga chapter.

If it is something i love in VK the the twisted way the pj's speak and take their actions but in consonace with their very real and angelical feelings inside, As a game that everyone knows and keeps on it with hope in the end the naked true will win protecting them all!

PD: can you upload in Fanfition.net? I want to add it in my favorite stories.

[stygian_dream]

Thank you. :3

I rarely get on Fanfiction.net anymore, but I'll add it when I get the chance. ;3

[rayatta]

Awww, that was so sweet and tragic!! ^_^ I like the way you write: very to the point <3 I think it wraps up Zero's emotions toward Yuuki very well

[stygian_dream]

Thanks so much! I'm very happy you enjoyed it. <3333

[roxsan]

This was very well done! You portrayal Zero was beyond excellent. I could actually imagine this as a scene in the manga! :D I'll be eagerly watching your LJ for more VK stories :)

[stygian_dream]

^/////^ Thank you so much!!!! <333