Drowning is not so pitiful (as the attempt to rise). Lost Fic: Kuliet: 1 of 3

[carlyisnot]

Title : Drowning is not so pitiful ...
Author: Carly Carter
Fandom: Lost
Pairing: Kate/Juliet (& some unfortunate implications of Jate & Jacket)
Rating: PG ish (Some swearing)
Disclaimer: Don't own anything

Summary: The dense jungle obscuring her view, Juliet sees only the back of his head as he stands facing Kate. Kate's clothes are saturated,

Comments

[ficcy_one]

I like where you're going with this, thanks for writing and posting :).

I also really dug the Emily Dickinson quote, hadn't read that one before. It definitely added a solid note to the feel of the story.

Thanks again!

[carlyisnot]

Thank you so much for the beautiful comments, and for taking time to read. Glad you liked the quote, i love Emily Dickinson :) Hope you will continue to enjoy the rest of the story.

Awesome icon :) love it!

xoxo
Carly

[xixlovexgreenx]

Now, you make me despise my poor jacky. lol But you can pull that off, so this must be some damn good writing from you. *nods*

I love how compassionate Juliet is, because she REALLY used to be like that. I love it. Also, I love how she managed to still keep Jack on her side even though her reasons for going after Kate weren't the ones he suspected.

MOAAAAR PLZ? xD

[carlyisnot]

Aw thanks for stopping by and reading :) Don't worry, Jack actually redeems himself in the next chapter, i'm not sure how it happened truly as i tend to paint him as a villain in fics, but somehow in this one, he does end up having a heart. Its actually Kate who probably ends up coming off worse in the story, but I find it so damn easy to forgive her anything lol.

I really love the gentle compassionate site to Juliet too, its such a beautiful part of her, and its something that I think Kate really needs. They just fit so well together sometimes, I really adore that side of Juliet.

Aw yeah, Juliet is smart, going after Kate without getting offside with Jack, Just hope Juliet can convince Kate of her true motives.

Thanks so much for the feedback :)
You're magnificent! (It's been days since i've abused that word!)
xoxo

[zippy88]

Well you already know what I think of this story but I'll say it again! It's brilliant! :) Hopefully my comments in my email made sense and hey look - you decided on a title, and it's a great title from a really inspiration quote. Can't wait to read more! :)