The Stuff Life is Made Of, 4/5

[carlisle_coop]

Donna approached the door with some trepidation, worried about how quickly the Doctor had decided their destination. She’d had her concerns about travelling anywhere in the TARDIS; he’d reassured her that no one would miss them from the back garden in the middle of the night, and they’d be back before the sun rose. She certainly hoped he was right.

Comments

[shinyopals]

Well, I'm glad it was a cock up. I did briefly wonder if he was being a git. Really hope Rose listens to him! :S

Love the giraffes XD

Definitely can't wait for the next bit!

[carlisle_coop]

I did briefly wonder if he was being a git.

Ten definitely possesses that ability; but in this case, he's going to do as little as possible to alienate Rose. That is, to *deliberately* alienate Rose....

[maniacalshen]

I think... I think one of the very few things that can help the Doctor right now is him crying. Just start sniffling and apologizing. I'm not even sure Rose would know what to do.

But, on the more realistic front, I have no idea what's going to happen next. Brilliant reasoning, btw, with the dateline. Simple but incredibly damning.

[carlisle_coop]

I think one of the very few things that can help the Doctor right now is him crying.

Ah, Ten. He definitely has some explaining to do...

I have no idea what's going to happen next.

*g* We hope you enjoy what will be posted tomorrow!

Oh, no!

[trustme1013]

Oh, no.

Typical, yes, of the Doctor, but, oh no.

I still can't believe he left without her -- really, too confident, he is...

Poor Rose. Poor, poor Rose. She's been put through the ringer for nothing but simple hubris.

I have to say that I don't think the Doctor will babble his way through this. I kind of see him falling to his knees before her in supplication; he's completely at her mercy now.

It makes my stomach sick just thinking about this.

Brilliant use of the IDL, by the way. Too clever by half you are!

Re: Oh, no!

[carlisle_coop]

Typical, yes, of the Doctor, but, oh no.

Exactly right. Ten...*sigh*. If only he could just sit still, none of this would have happened...theoretically.

(really, though--"exactly right" applies to each of the character observations in your comment)

Too clever by half you are!

The benefits of working as a group, instead of an individual, cannot be overstated (although don't get us wrong--we do each enjoy writing as "ourselves"!).

Re: Oh, no!

[carlisle_coop]

Again I say: IDL? Totally the Poster. The rest of us were bloody useless.

Re: Oh, no!

[trustme1013]

Well, it's not exactly like it comes up at the top of a google search ... no sweat. Though -- I am that kind of nerd, and I am that lazy to use uncommon abbreviations. :)

[carlisle_coop]

Ten needs all of the luck he can get.

thank you kindly for updating earlier today

The posting schedule is all down to the schedule of The Poster; there are no promises that the final chapter will go up as early tomorrow, but we'll try!

[angel932]

What a ....HUMAN mistake! If anyone can make Rose forgive him, it's 10.

[carlisle_coop]

You'll have the answer tomorrow!