The Winter Manor 21/?

Jul 15, 2008 15:18

Title: The Winter Manor
Author: Cards
Rating: R
Summery: After the events of the Christmas, there is Easter, and a tentative new start to something that neither boy can name.
Warnings: bit of boy sexing and dealing with issues of abuse.
Disclaimer: ... dude its a historical fiction au rps story. how could it be true.

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the winter manor, j2

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spriteful July 15 2008, 21:07:29 UTC
Poor boys. Both so scared and confused. I hope they're able to overcome their misunderstandings.

Mackenzie's in love with the coachman. So cute.

Sounds like you've had an eventful summer!

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guard_the_cards July 15 2008, 21:26:21 UTC
Yeah, they are confused, and Jared is confused, and Jensen is now competely terrified

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idiot4dean July 15 2008, 21:58:03 UTC
The utter confusion between the boys is heart-rendering. Jensen knows his position and some of what's expected but Jared keeps breaking through that and leaving him unsure. Jared doesn't understand his position and keeps making mistakes without realising it. They both want the other but Jensen can't say anything and Jared doesn't know how to say it right. Poor boys. Love Mackenzie's talk about the dashing coachman!

Looking forward to more.

Hugs everyone.

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guard_the_cards July 15 2008, 22:14:25 UTC
Mackenzie and her crush is adorable, I'm kind of loving it. She's absolutly besotted with Chris, who doesn't actually know she exists.

And jared really doesn't understand his position, at all, which comes up time and time again. He just doesn't get why Jensen isn't forthcoming and doesn't speak with him, and why Jensen doesn't ever tell him what he wants.

glad you liked it!

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kes1807 July 15 2008, 22:49:36 UTC
Great update, I was so pleased to see this.

Poor boys, so confused neither knowing how to act with the other. I hope they can work thing out.

Looking forward to more, Kes.

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guard_the_cards July 15 2008, 23:03:56 UTC
glad you liked it. Yeah, the boys tension and confusion is pretty much the mainstay of this story

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z3s_keep_going July 15 2008, 23:43:53 UTC
yay for an update!

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guard_the_cards July 15 2008, 23:46:26 UTC
glad you liked!!

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9thof9 July 16 2008, 00:46:43 UTC
Poor darlings, they are so confused. I want to cuddle them and whisper the clues into their pretty ears. (Yes I think they have pretty ears. So what?)

I felt bad for Jared when he went down to the kitchen but was no longer welcome.

Good update. And wow, you've been through a lot lately.

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guard_the_cards July 16 2008, 01:08:01 UTC
Yeah, I wasn't actually expecting any angst, this was supposed to be all fluffy, I mean it starts out that way, Jensen actually having someone taking care of his sexual needs, without making it seem like something he should be greatful for. But then no, Jared had to be all poking his nose into the kitchen, and Jensen had to decide that Jared was like everyone else, and Jared just doesn't know what Jensen was about to do (no one has explained oral sex to him)

Oh and that's only the basic stuff I've been through, its been a hard two months

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