SV Fic: 1,001 Kryptonian Nights (Chlark, Adult), Chapter 3/5??

[carcassi]

From the dropoff in comments on my last update, it looks as if many of you have lost interest in my latest fairytale!Chlark fic. *Tragic sigh*

Which of course means that I appreciate those who DID comment even more. *Smishes my wonderful commenters*

I definitely intend to finish this fic, most of all for butifulyletdown, to whom this fic is dedicated, and

Comments

[angelbsb]

love this , oh them using the honey during sex was so hot . oh my i hope she decieds to stay with him. oh no where did jor-el send chloe ? PPMS

[carcassi]

Hee, glad you liked the honey!! Laurelnola said my fic gave her a craving for baklava, so of course I did my best to satisfy it. *eg*

I'm working on the next chappie, never fear! I'll try to post it by next week.

Thank you for the lovely feedback, you know how much I appreciate it! :)

[laurelnola]

You already know I love this, but it's always worth repeating. I adore this totally creative new way you've come up with for them to have flying-sex. I mean, who else would give them the flying carpet ride with all the gorgeous imagery but without the flying carpet? ;-)

And anytime you combine sex with food, well, you KNOW I'm on board for that. Got any strawberries to go with that baklava? *wink wink*

Anyway, I can't wait to see how Kal-el rescues his feisty harem girl who has only been in the palace for less that 72 hours and is already in mortal danger. Way to go, Chloe! A new record! :-D

Wonderful as ever, Debbie!!

[carcassi]

*Bows to my awesome beta* And it's worth repeating how much I appreciate YOUR help, O co-counsel!! *Hugs* Also, I hope this chappie satisfied your craving for baklava. ;)

who else would give them the flying carpet ride with all the gorgeous imagery but without the flying carpet?

Well, in a way, Kal-El *was* Chloe's flying carpet. Although he was, er, a wee bit more responsive than your average handwoven Oriental. *G*

Got any strawberries to go with that baklava? *wink wink*

LOL!! I think the strawberries are already spoken for by a certain couple we both know. ;) (I STILL can't get that temple scene out of my mind!!)

I can't wait to see how Kal-el rescues his feisty harem girl who has only been in the palace for less that 72 hours and is already in mortal danger.

Hey, Chloe's always been a fast worker. :D And never fear, dear Dawn, you will definitely be the first to discover what happens next!

Thank you, as always, for the wonderful feedback!! *Hands you a big, juicy piece of baklava*

[mari2anne]

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[carcassi]

Aww, Mari2anne, thank you for your encouragement!! *Hugs*

I know what you're saying about ksite and ffnet. They do show the number of views, which is great. I don't go to ksite anymore b/c it's depressing, to me, to see that it's become pretty much a Clois site, but once this is done I may post it on ffnet.

I've only posted two on LJ... one had four commentors; two of whom loyally followed every chapter with most encouraging feedback; and my second story didn't get a single comment on LJ (I was depressed)OMG, I'm so sorry! To be honest, I haven't followed much Chlark fic in the past year or so, apart from Dawn and Dee's, and I have a feeling a lot of other Chlark fans on LJ may have given up reading fic, too. I remember being depressed last year when I posted "Gods and Butterflies" to ffnet and saw that it was the sole Chlark submission that day, lost amid a flood of Clois fic

[mari2anne]

I completely agree with you that Chlark is a wonderful, timeless ship. I am still surprised that after creating such a wonderful character as Chloe that the SV writers became completely clueless as to what to do with her, except make her life miserable. How they can so easily destroy something they created is beyond me.

I still love to read fanfic; there are a few very good new stories on the K-Site Chlark thread; there are actually a few die-hard Chlarkers like us still left out there.

Thank you again for continuing this lovely story.

[babydee1]

"...please don't tell BabyDee, but she's gotten me hooked on cliffhangers, and you left a superb one at the end of this chapter."

Deb:"My lips are sealed! Shhhh, don't encourage her. *Looks sidewise cautiously*"

A-ha!!! I knew my Evil Cliffies would catch on with time! *cackles gleefully*

[eternal_moonie]

totally LOVE this story!!

[carcassi]

Whee, thank you!!!!

[anonymous]

Great cliffhanger! I liked all the sensual details you added to your descriptions as it really intensified the story.

[carcassi]

Thank you, it's always wonderful to welcome a new reader! Glad you liked this! :)