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Fic: Men of their Word

Dec 21, 2009 17:17

Title: Men of their Word
Author: caramelsilver
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Warnings: Genderfuck. (boy!Susan and boy!Lucy)
Word count: 1000
Prompt: Chronicles of Narnia, all-male!Pevensies and female!Rabadash, it's not that we don't like her well no, actually, it is.

Summary: When Princess Raba of Calormen visit the Narnian court, King Sam is instantly ( Read more... )

genderfuck, my fanfiction, all male!pevensies, fandom: narnia

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caramelsilver December 21 2009, 19:03:25 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it, and that you can still recognize Lucy and Susan in Lucas and Sam. I was so happy with how Edmund turned out in this. He just flowed out of my fingers, into my favorite version of him.

I'm so happy you think that's funny, and not too cheesy. I was unsure if I should add that joke or not. Yeah, Peter has a horrible sense of humour. And we love him for it=)

Thank you so much for the review and thank you so much for the beta &hearts

redsilverchains December 23 2009, 04:21:12 UTC

(Sorry 'bout the deleted comment-- my first attempt came out with crappy formatting)

Hee! I’m wickedly happy that the prompt was cracky enough to break the three-sentence mold :D

I love Edmund’s line about being under a spell-I figure he was always slightly paranoid after the White Witch, enough to have his own jokes about it. And I never considered that going to Calormen to see how Rabadash behaves at home might be his idea, but that makes so much sense.

Out of all of them, Lucy was always established to be the most honest so I can definitely see her, er him, choosing to keep silent here. And yes, he’d certainly judge someone based on how someone treated his dear friends.

I agree with grim_lupine--Peter breaking stoicism and cracking a stupid joke is hilarious and seems so fitting.(Random but have you read any Star Wars Expanded Universe books? I think he’d be a lot like Jacen Solo in that respect) Like in PC when in the midst of issuing orders and generally being awesome, he asked the bear not to suck on his paws(okay not exactly a joke ( ... )

caramelsilver December 23 2009, 23:43:52 UTC

Hee! Yeah, I knew the moment I saw the prompt that I would not be able to fill this with only three sentences. (I needed Lucas to be pissed, Edmund to be awesome, wine drinking and a corny joke. No way I could fit that into three sentences!)

Oh yeah, Lucy would have totally told Susan what she thought; which is the difference between Lucas and Lucy in this scene. Lucy would not have had any second thoughts of telling Susan what she thought at once, Lucas decided to merely keep quiet. (I also think that the reason Lucy didn't come along to Calormen in HHB was that she was staying behind in protest (never mind that someone had to stay at home, IT WAS TOTALLY A PROTEST!) and Susan didn't bring her as punishment ( ... )