Ale and I are both SWAMPED with things we MUST DO for the next day, but tomorrow bright and early we shall finish reading and comment. I will tell you that we are both fantastically THRILLED already, by the lovely summary and the WARNINGS *___* and that we impatiently look forward to a time when Maia has no terrible work deadlines,and Ale has a bit of a moment to take an anxious gasp of air.
But you've won our hearts already, no need to be afraid <3 Just leaving this here so you'll know you are already adored, and WE SHALL RETURN <3 <3
HELLO ANON. AS PROMISED, WE HAVE RETURNED. WITH COMMENTS.
FIRST OF ALL. YOU WROTE US. BDSM RYOKAME. LIKE. WE REALIZE THAT YOU, YOU KNOW, MAY HAVE RECIEVED SUBTLE HINTS THAT WE WANTED BDSM RYOKAME. LIKE. MAYBE THAT MIGHT BE. EXACTLY. EXACTLY WHAT WE WANTED. SO THANK YOU FOR NOTICING OUR. YOU KNOW. SUBTLE. SO SUBTLE. HINTS.
Anyway. This story delivered on quite a few fun little kinks and the way it was written was AWESOME.
The blood! Oh the blood T____T <3
We were particularly fond of some of your sentences, the way they were put together:
“it was like we were both huge rocks colliding in the space and then when I thought I was the one who had the upper hand, I shattered.”
This is pretty. Maia has a fondness for metaphors, and Ale has a fondness for thing that are generally lovely. <3
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Kame’s a sword straight through his chest, and that’s the difference, he realises with a start, between lust and love.THIS IS SO GREAT! It's like, direct, and doesn't use flowerly language or ambiguities... it pierces you just like Kame, a
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And the end. The end is. THE END IS. IT EXISTS. WE HAVE EXISTENTIALIST COMMENTS. Okay, no, no, en serio, WE ARE TWO HAPPY LADIES.
Anon, it's obvious you put a lot of time and care into this, and it shows. You did an awesome job at writing FOR US, catering to the things we love, and the effort shows, and we both appreciate it very, very much. <3 Loving you so much right now, because.
Oh I love it so very much <3 It's so refreshing to see Ryo in this kind of situation when usually he's the Ore-sama one XD And I love the small bits of Kame and Oppa~ <3
Hehe I didn't know it's you although I had a suspicion that it's gotta be yours fufu~ The adorable spoiltness of Kame clinging to Oppa sort of gives it away XD Kame crushing on Oppa and is ignored but is loved by everybody someone everybody else is the cutest thing ever. I'm on lj and twitter although sometimes inconsistent due to crappy net connection XD I think I already follow you on twitter #isastalker #hides
I loved this. I've never considered myself particularly S or M, but I really, really love how you portrayed Kame in this. And Ryo! Of all the people to be jerked around by Kame, you chose poison-tongue Ryo, and I am partial to RyoKame so that just makes it even more brilliant. This fic was so fascinating in a mind-boggling way, I don't even know what else to say but basically, I loved it.
thank you so much ;~; I'm really glad you like this version of Kame, because I was kinda uncertain writing him this way, thank you so much for this comment, it really made me feel comfortable!
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“Maybe we can work as something simpler. Like we can start falling in love, for example.” This &hearst; So cute! And also Kame's ending sentence xD
All in all, I really enjoyed it :)
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Ale and I are both SWAMPED with things we MUST DO for the next day, but tomorrow bright and early we shall finish reading and comment. I will tell you that we are both fantastically THRILLED already, by the lovely summary and the WARNINGS *___* and that we impatiently look forward to a time when Maia has no terrible work deadlines,and Ale has a bit of a moment to take an anxious gasp of air.
But you've won our hearts already, no need to be afraid <3 Just leaving this here so you'll know you are already adored, and WE SHALL RETURN <3 <3
Love,
Maia and Ale (or maayacola and elanielyn)
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FIRST OF ALL. YOU WROTE US. BDSM RYOKAME. LIKE. WE REALIZE THAT YOU, YOU KNOW, MAY HAVE RECIEVED SUBTLE HINTS THAT WE WANTED BDSM RYOKAME. LIKE. MAYBE THAT MIGHT BE. EXACTLY. EXACTLY WHAT WE WANTED. SO THANK YOU FOR NOTICING OUR. YOU KNOW. SUBTLE. SO SUBTLE. HINTS.
Anyway. This story delivered on quite a few fun little kinks and the way it was written was AWESOME.
The blood! Oh the blood T____T <3
We were particularly fond of some of your sentences, the way they were put together:
“it was like we were both huge rocks colliding in the space and then when I thought I was the one who had the upper hand, I shattered.”
This is pretty. Maia has a fondness for metaphors, and Ale has a fondness for thing that are generally lovely. <3
AND
Kame’s a sword straight through his chest, and that’s the difference, he realises with a start, between lust and love.THIS IS SO GREAT! It's like, direct, and doesn't use flowerly language or ambiguities... it pierces you just like Kame, a ( ... )
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Anon, it's obvious you put a lot of time and care into this, and it shows. You did an awesome job at writing FOR US, catering to the things we love, and the effort shows, and we both appreciate it very, very much. <3 Loving you so much right now, because.
YES.
Love,
Maia and Ale <3
P.S: HAVE SOME MORE LOVE.
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ilu very much too~
i had so many feelings upon reading your comment, most of them had me clutching my heart in glee *__*
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WHERE ARE YOU USUALLY FOUND AND CAN I STALK YOU SOMEWHERE *____*
(oh wait, did you know it was me who did this..?)
strange comments aside, thank you so much for the compliment, it means a lot to me!
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you follow me? what's your twittername? i don't mean to uhm, forget but sometimes if i don't get to talk to the person much, i tend to forget ;__;
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“All this time I thought I was using you to prove something,” Ryo whispers, “but I got myself wrapped around your fingers and I didn’t even know it.”
Kame’s lips quiver with an intense mix of excitement and anticipation.
“Defeat has a price, you know.”
this part ;~; <3
Thank you for writing this! :D
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