Drabble - The Painter and the Magician

Feb 22, 2009 16:07

Title: The Painter and the Magician
Pairing: Yoochun-focused; Yoochun/Yunho, Yoochun/Jaejoong
Rating: G
Genre: Romance; AU
Summary: There were two choices since the beginning.
240 words.
A/N: Just a spur-of-the-moment drabble while listening to 'Stars' by F.T. Island. Forcoffeemilk23 and mikiraa who likes this a lot. :DDD i love youuu~ ♥

the painter and the magician )

fandom: tvxq, length: drabble

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savedby_music February 23 2009, 00:28:54 UTC
DUDE SHIRLEY.
WHY ARE YOU HITTING YOUR HEAD OVER EVERY HARD SURFACE?
D:
the drabble is SPLENDID.
alright? :D

He colored the earth with brilliance, lighting up every dark corner with shades of reds and yellows.

KDFHKLAHDGKAD
T.T
shirley. why do you hurt yourself so?
whyyy? when you are so obviously such a talented painter-of-tales? O:

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cant_stop02 February 23 2009, 00:33:29 UTC
ASLDKHSDF. ;_; lies.
LIES. i refuse to listen. ;___;

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savedby_music February 23 2009, 00:38:50 UTC
ARE YOU GOING THROUGH A MID-WRITER'S CRISIS? D:

do we need to discuss anything?

i find it VERY simple.

shirley = awesome fics = love

:)

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cant_stop02 February 23 2009, 00:44:10 UTC
mid-writer's crisis, LOL. my muse just crawled back to your house again, that's all. tell her i miss her. D:

ahhh, stop flattering me like that. ;__; i honestly don't think that highly of this piece. DD': really.

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rina_ah February 23 2009, 01:09:38 UTC
oooh, i like the way you described the two.
good job! =)

He painted pictures of love onto a canvas, slow and careful, spending countless of days on a single masterpiece. He colored the earth with brilliance, lighting up every dark corner with shades of reds and yellows.
impressive.

You conjured the stars and scattered them across the night sky; you carried wishes in your pockets and blew them into the air, golden sparks flying every which way. again, impressive. such prodigious vocabulary you have. ;D

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cant_stop02 February 23 2009, 01:11:36 UTC
;__; omg i love you. ♥

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rivium7fold February 23 2009, 01:50:46 UTC
I love the way you described YunHo and JaeJoong without even using their names. You just know who was who from your word choice and implications on the two different personalities! Amazing job!
♥♥

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cant_stop02 February 23 2009, 01:53:30 UTC
-blushes- ohhh thank you so much! ^^
i tried my best on getting Yunho's and Jaejoong's personalities right, i'm glad you could pick that up.
♥!

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mitzuki_chan February 23 2009, 02:43:24 UTC
ALDKFJALDKFDSLKF!!!!! ♥

He painted pictures of love onto a canvas, slow and careful
:DDDD

wild and free, constantly running at the speed of a falling star
:DDDD x100000000000000000

you carried wishes in your pockets and blew them into the air
-gleeful-

blond hair flying in the wind
YAY FOR JAE'S BLOND HAIR OMG.

running past the horizons


i caught jae's characterization, but didn't manage to catch ho's [thought it was chun, but then my brain thinks every fic i read is jaechun, so :\] which means that you should totally write more ho so i can familiarize myself with him 8D

AND.
NOT FAIR POSTING THIS WHILE I WAS AFK SO THAT I COULDN'T GET FIRST SPOT. YOU BETTER MAKE IT UP TO ME BY WRITING MORE TINY!JAECHUN.

Off to eat dinner now. Will bother you some more on gtalk when i get back :)

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cant_stop02 February 23 2009, 02:49:22 UTC
ASDLKHSDFLKH ;____; you're killing me with this comment. killing me and i'm dying. so hard. oh save me. aslkhsdf.

quotebacks. oh. oh my heart. asdlkhsdf. ;____; i love you so much.
I LOVE YOU. ♥♥♥

i should definitely write more ho. :D doing so now actually. but i hope i don't epik fail. ;______;

ASLDKHSDF OK FINE. so demanding, you. but i love it when you're demanding? ;D

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mitzuki_chan February 23 2009, 04:11:50 UTC
ADLFKJADLFK YES, MISSION ACCOMPLISHED!!

I LOVE YOU MORE ♥♥♥

aldkfjadlfk YAY FOR MORE HO!! -flails-
Ouch, my shoulders. Wii!bowling is surprisingly intense :|

Kek. I know you love it ;)

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cant_stop02 February 23 2009, 04:20:29 UTC
ASDLHSDFLKHASD LOL.

YOU- YOU CHEATED! >:(
I LOVE YOU MORE THAN YOU LOVE ME. RAWR. ♥

:'DD HO LOVE. ♥
is it now? for someone who's ball goes at 2km/hour, i'm sure it is. ;)

:O omo you found out. i do, i do love it. .__. secretly.
winkwink. ;D

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coffeemilk23 February 23 2009, 05:03:23 UTC
♥ ♥ &hearts

LOVE. TO YOU.
I LOVE ALL OF THIS. YOUR WORDS ARE SO.
SLKDJASLKJDSDAKL.
SO MUCH LOVE.

Dedicate this fic to me! :D Pweese?

(Sorry, can't quote anything ;__; I've got a Science Lab to finish.)
♥ !!

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cant_stop02 February 23 2009, 05:11:54 UTC
ALSDKHSDF. ;__;

I LOVE YOU. ♥

aand- dedicated. ;)

g'luck on your Sci lab, darling!
♥!

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