Fic - Watching Him - PG

[canadian_jay]

Title: Watching Him
Character(s): Lester, Cutter
Warnings: None known
Rating: PG
Beta(s): None - Brit checking & critique appreciated!
Author's Notes: The product of Knitekat's 'encouragement' the other night for PriWriMo. We confused ourselves talking about wings or something and yeah...
Disclaimer: Not mine, never mine, don't sue!
Summary: A brief

Comments

[lukadreaming]

Ooh, I like this universe! So any time you feel like writing more in it . . . *g*.

[canadian_jay]

*g* I've been on an S1 kick recently, not sure why!

And thanks!

[tli]

Ooh, what an intriguing AU! I really liked Lester in this.

[canadian_jay]

Thanks! Especially glad you liked Lester. :)

[ebonyfeather]

Lester's musings were great (especially giving himself a mental telling-off in his ex-wife's voice).

I'd like to read more of this 'verse...

[canadian_jay]

Hee, thanks! I thought about doing the 'mother's voice' bit, but decided that was a bit cliche... *g*

That seems to be a consensus, lol!

[telperion_15]

I'm not especially a fan of wing!fic, but I did really like the descriptions in this. I also really liked Lester's mental response to Cutter's question! ;)

[canadian_jay]

Ooh, thanks! Especially as you're not usually a fan of wing!fic. And hee! It's a nice thought, isn't it? *g*

[fredbassett]

It's wing!fic!!!

Yay, that's lovely! I adored the description of Cutter's wings looking harassed.

[canadian_jay]

It is! :D

Thanks! I was briefly tempted to make Cutter of harrier bird-stock, just so I could make a bad pun about 'being harried'. xP