Fic - Watching Him - PG

Nov 19, 2010 17:16

Title: Watching Him
Character(s): Lester, Cutter
Warnings: None known
Rating: PG
Beta(s): None - Brit checking & critique appreciated!
Author's Notes: The product of Knitekat's 'encouragement' the other night for PriWriMo. We confused ourselves talking about wings or something and yeah...
Disclaimer: Not mine, never mine, don't sue!
Summary: A brief ( Read more... )

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reggietate November 19 2010, 23:02:32 UTC
I've never quite got the whole wingfic thing, but this is rather good all the same, and with some lovely descriptive bits. And I love Lester mentally telling himself off in his ex-wife's voice :-)

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canadian_jay November 20 2010, 02:15:11 UTC
Ooh, thanks! *blushes a little* I do enjoy describing things. Glad you enjoyed it!

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knitekat November 19 2010, 23:39:44 UTC
Oh *pets the birdie* Well done. Verry nice.

Loved Lester mentally telling himself off and yes, I want what Lester wants.

More, please.

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canadian_jay November 20 2010, 02:16:05 UTC
*purrs, in an avian manner* Thankies, luv!

Hee!

Demanding wretch. ;D

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knitekat November 20 2010, 22:33:36 UTC
Are you surprised. I mean, it is Lester fic.

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canadian_jay November 20 2010, 22:38:28 UTC
*g* 'Course not.

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mulder200 November 20 2010, 01:01:26 UTC
It's probably because I am on an angel kick, but I just love wing fics.

And this definitely sounds like the beginning of something interesting.

I hope you decide to explore more of this verse.

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canadian_jay November 20 2010, 02:16:41 UTC
I must say, I'm more fascinated by the possibilites of the flight muscles than the wings themselves... *g*

Thanks for reading! And though I make no promises, you never know!

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kerry_louise November 20 2010, 01:15:55 UTC
So thats what that was about! *grins* But really, Lester, go ahead and bend Cutter over the desk... it's a good idea, honest!

Also... WINGS! Yay! *grins*

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canadian_jay November 20 2010, 02:17:30 UTC
This is what what was about? Mine and Knitekat's confusing conversation the other night? *g* Lol! I'm with you, but Lester's being silly and stubborn!

:D Wings!

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kerry_louise November 20 2010, 11:08:41 UTC
No the question the other day about the line near the end, about sleeping with subordinates... or not as the case may be, lol.

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canadian_jay November 20 2010, 16:23:53 UTC
Oh! Yes, that. I totally forgot I'd done that. *g* I guess technically you should be in the beta slot then. ;P

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tay_21 November 20 2010, 03:08:02 UTC
So that's wing!fic huh? Very nice. The descriptions were quite beautiful. Excellent job. And Yay! You got to write more Lester. This was really cool.

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canadian_jay November 20 2010, 03:12:00 UTC
*g* Never read wing!fic before? And thanks! I love it when I have an excuse to describe stuff, lol. Thanks again!

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tay_21 November 20 2010, 04:02:12 UTC
I know there's like a tag for it over on Denial, but I've never really gone exploring. :-)

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canadian_jay November 20 2010, 04:08:10 UTC
*g* Yeah, its really just fic with, well, wings. There's some good stuff, though! Some great manips on the Denial tag, IIRC.

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