Gifts Chapter 6

Aug 10, 2004 23:38

Is now up at my website. http://www.jadesfic.com/fiction/forward_momentum.html Those of you following the story, please read and let me know what you think. Sorry I didn't get this on the website sooner, it must have slipped my mind.

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ladyflowdi August 11 2004, 01:20:50 UTC
EEEEEEEE and EEEEEE! That was incredible. I absolutely ADORE Mother Snape--she was so haughty and refined, like a lady out of A Jane Austin novel! So, SO lovely. I love how Harry panicked in the middle of the conversation Severus and his mother was having--it was such a human reaction. And I absolutely ADORE where you're going with this--I haven't been this excited over a fic in ages! I can't wait to read more, you're doing an excellent job :)

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madameceleste70 August 11 2004, 07:37:44 UTC
I love this series. It is one of the most original mpregs I've seen in awhile. I hope the updates are coming along nicely because I can't wait to see what happens next.

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luckybrans August 11 2004, 07:41:26 UTC
I simply adore this story.

I love Lady Snape as well. Strong matriarchal characters do it for me.

Harry's reactions are spot on for someone who's been through so much. I hope Snape can be of some comfort to him in the future.

Janus is one scary guy. He seems worse than Voldemort because he's so human. At least with Voldemort you could think of him as some asexual, snake monster. I'm quite afraid for Ginny.

I hope we don't have to wait so long for the next chapter.

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tigress35 August 11 2004, 10:21:01 UTC
Yay new part. Much enjoyed.

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_inzilbeth_ August 11 2004, 18:51:48 UTC
Excellent story!

Looking forward to more.

I think you are portraying Harry and Snape spot on. You have a lot of mysteries going on here. Mmmm. I" be staying around to see them solved.

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