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Comments 38
OUT for Yahiko and Nagi.
ABSTAIN for now on Phibrizo/Fibrizo/however we're spelling Slayers names today. It... sounds like him? But I have a thing against apps where a good part of the app is a different voice, like a letter or something. >D Because it makes it difficult for me to really judge the voice. Not to mention that we only see his REAL voice in this app, and not his pretend little boy voice. Is he just going to be straight with people and be the Hellmaster in camp? Or is he going to pretend to be a normal little boy?
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Also why I'm abstaining.
BY WHICH I MEAN are we gonna see his real personality in camp, or his fake one? I think it would be more IC for him to pretend to be a little boy in the presence of a large group of strangers, unless he were convinced he was in purgatory/hell/oblivion/wtfever.
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Nagi, I like everything you have before the letter, but... first, I'm not too fond of apps using whole paragraphs for "welcome letters" and other things that aren't in your character's voice (I wibbled on Fibrizo for this too, but. I thought it was worked in well enough). Because showing your voice is the main point of an app. It can work if there's of other substance to make up for it, but here the letter looks like the letter is nearly a third of the app. And everything after it was... okay, but not really catching. It seems more "generic girl trapped in camp" and less "Nagi" than the first part.
I HOPE YOU REAPP though. Hayate no Gotoku is ♥
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