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Nov 25, 2007 05:50

MORNING ROUND.

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. Closed~

good morning, angels. )

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Comments 38

veryshocking November 25 2007, 17:04:15 UTC
IN for Marmom and Nodame.

OUT for Yahiko and Nagi.

ABSTAIN for now on Phibrizo/Fibrizo/however we're spelling Slayers names today. It... sounds like him? But I have a thing against apps where a good part of the app is a different voice, like a letter or something. >D Because it makes it difficult for me to really judge the voice. Not to mention that we only see his REAL voice in this app, and not his pretend little boy voice. Is he just going to be straight with people and be the Hellmaster in camp? Or is he going to pretend to be a normal little boy?

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yakultjunkie November 25 2007, 18:38:06 UTC
That was my main concern when betaing the app, yes, and I don't think I found a way to express that. Thanks, Masahiro.

Also why I'm abstaining.

BY WHICH I MEAN are we gonna see his real personality in camp, or his fake one? I think it would be more IC for him to pretend to be a little boy in the presence of a large group of strangers, unless he were convinced he was in purgatory/hell/oblivion/wtfever.

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Brizo veryshocking November 25 2007, 21:47:20 UTC
Well I have an idea about which way to play him, but a beta gave me some advice that I'm still going back and forth about.

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Re: Brizo aberdevine November 25 2007, 23:07:56 UTC
Are you planning on sharing with the class...? XD

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noarmyatmyback November 25 2007, 17:09:51 UTC
IN for the baaaaby illusionist (oshi), Nodame, and Fibrizo! o/

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knowsthescore November 25 2007, 17:21:21 UTC
Out for Nagi, in for everyone else.

Nagi, I like everything you have before the letter, but... first, I'm not too fond of apps using whole paragraphs for "welcome letters" and other things that aren't in your character's voice (I wibbled on Fibrizo for this too, but. I thought it was worked in well enough). Because showing your voice is the main point of an app. It can work if there's of other substance to make up for it, but here the letter looks like the letter is nearly a third of the app. And everything after it was... okay, but not really catching. It seems more "generic girl trapped in camp" and less "Nagi" than the first part.

I HOPE YOU REAPP though. Hayate no Gotoku is ♥

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classprotector November 25 2007, 17:37:35 UTC
Abstain on Marmon and Fibrizo, in on Nodame, out for others. Ask if you want, but I'm pretty braindead at the moment.

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Stand-in for Yahiko apper classprotector November 25 2007, 17:49:38 UTC
If you don't mind?

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Re: Stand-in for Yahiko apper classprotector November 25 2007, 19:44:59 UTC
This seemed very similar to the last Yahiko app, and the voice is still strong! But the format is difficult. The assumed conversation is making it difficult to follow, and there's a lot of stuff coming in there that doesn't quite make sense because Yahiko is responding to it, but not really explaining it--that's especially true of Sebastian at the end. It has a lot of funny pieces, but it's not really a cohesive whole, and that's damaging the humor.

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Hellmaster apper classprotector November 25 2007, 21:41:14 UTC
Is there anything i can say to get you to change that abstain to an IN!?

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ocimum November 25 2007, 18:17:56 UTC
In on tentacle baby VOTING ON REST WHEN I GET BACK

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