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[recurrence]

MORNING ROUND.

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. Closed~

Comments

[master_of_mon]

All in aside from Nagi and an abstain on Fibrizo (t-too early to try and read special formatting I'M SURE IT'S AWESOME THO TTb).

Yahiko- I voted in because it is a solid app and I could see him getting in a situation like that. But like Ickis said, the person he's talking too needs to be a little more defined (cross dressing zombie? gorilla? Chuck Norris?) The fourth sentence/paragraph seems out of place, too.

Nagi- Just felt like too many ideas in the app :( First he's kidnapped, then gets a letter, and then he thinks it's all an act? It's like there are three beginnings in one app....wait no, that doesn't make sense and I feel like I'm contradicting myself. IN ANY CASE it's well written but just doesn't feel solid or have much of a distinct voice? I hope that helps ;;b it's earlyyy my crit no make sense.

[im_ur_master]

she's kidnapped, then gets a letter, and then she thinks it's all an act?

Fixed. >.>

[master_of_mon]

I SAID IT WAS EARLY lemme alone ;; sob

[justajackknife]

*Pets*

[im_ur_master]

Abstain on the baby and the tsundere (Bias! >.>), in on the piano fetishist and tiny shouta death (HAY QUINCY LOOK WHO IT IS 8D). Out for the Kenshinketeer.

Yahiko, the idea was sound but the subject he was bouncing his thoughts off of were not. Were it the local zombies/plants/birdies/etc, it would have been! But, speaking from experience, NPC apps that are spoken to a particular person instead of a collective never fly very well unless they're camp props. Take that bit into consideration, and give it another go! I am rooting for you! ♥

[moobsareatrap]

Out on Nagi and Yahiko, all others in.

[beligerence]

Uwa~ It's that annoying midget ♥

Marmonnnnn!!!111

[manjuueatsyou]

Marmon (OMG!! ♥) and Fibrizo in, Yahiko out, the rest abstain!