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recurrence in campfuckuvote

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Nov 04, 2007 12:05

Aaaaaand here's another batch! Don't forget to vote on any of the other open batches if you've got the time!

eta: Don't forget! If you offer to leave concrit and someone asks you for it, it'd be nice if you could leave some for the apper so they have an idea of what to do for a reapp if necessary ( Read more... )

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mymonsterskeepr November 4 2007, 20:15:10 UTC

MONSTER

Abstain due to beta BUT I LOVE YOU HONEY. Poke me if you are ever borderline.

VOTES takemyothereye November 4 2007, 20:36:00 UTC

Matsunaga was my in (are you reapping? this is much better!), and all others were out.

Ban Apper mymonsterskeepr November 4 2007, 21:02:15 UTC

Concrit please? Any feedback would be lovingly appreciated.

Re: Ban Apper takemyothereye November 4 2007, 21:20:39 UTC

Aah, I remember you from last time too! This is MUCH better than last time, but some parts of your app were really confusing to me. Like... the tree thing? Why did he bring up a tree in the first place? And the 'meal ticket out of here' thing- you've mixed a metaphor there, I think, but... what is Ban doing this for? Who gave him the job- I thought it was the parking ticket lady but then realized someone new had just showed up? Maybe I'm just being dense and this stuff's obvious, but it was a confusing read for me.

You've also got some pretty blatant spelling and grammar errors in your canon (where I can't write them off as IC) and your app (where I would, but... 'tours'?)

So overall, I'd suggest one really strict beta, and keep that enthusiasm, it's really great.

Thread 14

povertyprincess November 4 2007, 20:15:22 UTC

SOUSUKE???

fistfirst November 4 2007, 20:15:56 UTC

Aigis, it pains me to vote you out because I really, really want an Aigis, but the app feels scattered and like a rehashing of some of her intro/battle dialogue. I would've liked to see more of her in regards to camp itself and how she'd interact with that!

OTHER VOTES IN A MINUTE, I keep flipping around. S-sorry.

fistfirst November 4 2007, 20:22:26 UTC

Luck abstain, Matsunaga and Ban are out (but I'm going to reread these later because I keep going back and forth), and Sousuke and Sakura are my ins.

Luck, er. I'm on the fence about you. Something seems off about the voice to me? I always had the impression that he was that sort of smooth operator type and wasn't ruffled by much. I can hear it in some parts, but ... mm, I need to reread it later.

Ban Apper fistfirst November 4 2007, 21:03:27 UTC

I'm hoping for a reread and some feedback. Concrit is cool, awesome, and hoped for. :D

Re: Ban Apper fistfirst November 4 2007, 21:22:37 UTC

Same stuff as Kid, basically! I flipped because you've got a good voice and enthusiasm going here -- I'd just advise you to keep an eye out for typos and whatnot when playing.

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alwaysgoesahead November 4 2007, 20:16:16 UTC

Luck out, everyone else in!

Ban Apper alwaysgoesahead November 4 2007, 21:04:50 UTC

Concrit please? Any feedback would be much loved!

Re: Ban Apper alwaysgoesahead November 4 2007, 21:13:56 UTC

a ha ha. ha.

i read that as all "out". but yea. THANK YOU FOR YOUR VOTE. XD

Re: Ban Apper robowolf November 4 2007, 21:22:31 UTC

I thought that was it! No problem, and good luck!

veryshocking November 4 2007, 20:20:51 UTC

Sakura IN, abstaining on the rest because I don't have the attention span to give you the consideration you deserve. I'll be back later.