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[recurrence]

Aaaaaand here's another batch! Don't forget to vote on any of the other open batches if you've got the time!

eta: Don't forget! If you offer to leave concrit and someone asks you for it, it'd be nice if you could leave some for the apper so they have an idea of what to do for a reapp if necessary

Comments

[fistfirst]

Aigis, it pains me to vote you out because I really, really want an Aigis, but the app feels scattered and like a rehashing of some of her intro/battle dialogue. I would've liked to see more of her in regards to camp itself and how she'd interact with that!

OTHER VOTES IN A MINUTE, I keep flipping around. S-sorry.

[fistfirst]

Luck abstain, Matsunaga and Ban are out (but I'm going to reread these later because I keep going back and forth), and Sousuke and Sakura are my ins.

Luck, er. I'm on the fence about you. Something seems off about the voice to me? I always had the impression that he was that sort of smooth operator type and wasn't ruffled by much. I can hear it in some parts, but ... mm, I need to reread it later.

Ban Apper

[fistfirst]

I'm hoping for a reread and some feedback. Concrit is cool, awesome, and hoped for. :D

Re: Ban Apper

[fistfirst]

Same stuff as Kid, basically! I flipped because you've got a good voice and enthusiasm going here -- I'd just advise you to keep an eye out for typos and whatnot when playing.

Re: Ban Apper

[fistfirst]

Thank you! For the vote and the concrit. I will try my best!

I need to get a grammer/spelling beta and start printing out my apps to read. XD

[fistfirst]

--oh what the hell, LUCK IN. Whatever issues I had are probably me being on crack and can be smoothed out later.

Ban and Matsunaga in on the reread.

Sara

[fistfirst]

Thank you! Though I'd still like to know what caused the wibbling, if you don't mind.