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[recurrence]

--trying to get this up before the Oscars start.

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. Closed!

Comments

[negi_cure]

W-wow Ishi-nii. I am going to wait to eat before voting so that I'm not too unfocused on reading, but. Ishiiiii

[negi_cure]

Okay Ishida, I had to give you an out. For starters, the app just didn't have a lot of camp in it. There was a reference to gorillas, but then it's all buttons and the shoutout to Ichigo and Inoue. And the buttons are a canon thing too, aren't they? I think? IF I AM WRONG please ignore this bit, but it's really not good to base an app around something that's canon like that. Unless they're crazy man eating camp buttons.

I also don't know what to think of his reaction to the blood on the shotguns. It seemed very subdued. I'm pretty sure Ishi would do more than just say 'oh.' to finding blood on weapons. And then it just shifts right into the gorilla reference. Actually, looking at both of those again -- they both look like intro paragraphs. They don't have any connection to each other and both come off as initial reactions to camp so the transition between them is kind've jarring.

And given that he knows about crazy gorillas and blood on shotguns and there having been a murder it seems kind've. Off that he would natter on about

[deusvobiscum]

Ishida, out. I'll vote on the rest in a bit.

Yeah, he's big on sewing, but the app is far too fixated on that for my liking. That aside, the voice seems off to me. I can't quite pinpoint what it is about it, but word choices here and there just ... aren't jiving with my interpretation ("I recognize the reiatsu of some of you, and so, uh. Hi, I guess." for one).

I can elaborate if you'd like.

Ishida apper

[deusvobiscum]

I would appreciate the elaboration. Reading the criticism here, I have to in fairness say, well..um, yeah, maybe. This voting thing is very scary, heh.

I was going for a sort of...almost shell-shocked kind of thing. But, that kind of understatement of a bad situation is only funny sometimes so...you know.

Re: Ishida apper

[deusvobiscum]

First things first: we had an Ishida who was here for over a year, played consistently, and had a really, really strong voice. As some of the other voters have said, it's going to take a good, strong showing that you have a firm grasp on his voice to get voted in.

Which ... wasn't here, honestly. The app itself was pretty bland. You want to grab the reader with your first sentence, and you want to show them exactly what the character is like. Which didn't happen here! There were also a bunch of formatting ticks and whatnot that read oddly to me, but I try to overlook those in apps

[evil_groupie]

MY COCK ARRIVED LOOK GUYS IT'S MY COCK.

And Ishida. Squeeeeeeeee~~

[evil_groupie]

Abstains
Kino
Taikobou

Abdel -IN- That's tasty meta.

Jiroubou -IN- Warranted. :3

Yousuke -IN- Dee Snyder ow.

ISHIDA -IN- I chuckled and was amused. The jokes aren't really the strongest, but I do appreciate the setup enough to think you can fly. Plz get in Potamos needs another demon-hating master of justice. :D

[imgottapower]

Your cock is looking mighty fine.

[persniktity]

TAIKOUBOU~~~~~~~~

...Ishida are you the one who contacted me about beta-ing or are you another one?

Votes in a sec.

VOTES

[amurderofsugar]

ABSTAIN on Yousuke (but poke me if you get close)
ISHIDA~~~~ please tell me~~~~~

All else out.

Ishida apper

[persniktity]

Um, does it matter? It is but...really, does it matter?

I would appreciate any thoughts you have. I think, though this still needs some work (in all honesty I think the criticism is justified) I think this is better than my previous effort.

Re: Ishida apper

[persniktity]

It does because I was wondering if Ryuuken and you chatted? I dunno, I guess I don't feel comfortable voting on an app someone expressed against. That's all. I was wondering if Ryuuken said it was alright or whatever, that's all. ^^;;

[inurtimelines]

Taikoubou~~~~

Voting after homework.

VOTES~

[inurtimelines]

Kino, I was leaning towards out, but I don't want to do that to you when you're kinda borderline so ABSTAIN.

Jiroubou, Yousuke, and Ishida, OUT.

Abdel and Taikoubou(~~~~ ♥!!!!) IN.