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[gaignun]

Second to last batch!

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!
Now VOTE. Closed!

Comments

[crouchingmoron]

Tsukumoooooooo

REAPP PLZ I swear I'll be less of a fail!beta ;;b♥

Tsukumo

[crouchingmoron]

You weren't a fail beta at all, you helped me a lot (even thought it doesn't show, it's not your fault)! It's my ineptness to write a solid canon and not hold a conversation with myself haha. ♥

I'M DETERMINED! You will have something of a Karneval cast! ;;

[dosetsu]

I voted out for Yukari and Rinali; everyone else was in!

Rinali

[dosetsu]

If you could give me any crit, I'd be very grateful thank you.

Trunks mun

[anonymous]

It's alright. Honestly, towards the end is where I thought I lost it cause here you are shrunk and you got apes surrounding you but whatever.

Also, it's nice to finally meet another Trunks rper~

Re: Trunks mun

[anonymous]

From what I was told, you mess with the barrier there's a side effect. Side effect was, yeah. I hope so, the votes are looking slim. ^^;

Hai, I'll keep that in mind. o/ Thankyou very much~

[cesia]

Truuuuuuuuuuuuuuunks IN \o/ ♥

Rinali OUT.

Abstain on the rest, because I'm canonblind and tired.

[cesia]

May I ask for crit please?

[cesia]

Alright, let's see if I can be coherent |D I couldn't really hear her voice completely, even if the flow was okay. Pretty much of what I saw was angry Rinali being angry, and not so much her more polite and smiley side where she's nice to everyone, even if they might a drooling zombie. There was also not so much explanation as to why she was special. I don't know how much of what everyone else's said that I'm repeating, but yeah. Too much anger for her, and some grammar errors made it fall for me.

Re-app, please! ♥

[cesia]

I plan to! Thanks for the feedback.

I wasn't actually happy with this app at all. I was writing up until midnight on the app date, and was too tired to spot those grammar mistakes. I didn't leave myself enough time to properly work on this app, I had an exam two days before and I just kind of failed. I really wanted to expand more on her nice side, she isn't normally that angry in her canon unless it's a really heated battle with the akuma, I didn't portray it very well. I'll do better next time, hopefully.

[soulbondage]

In for Sapphire and Sasha, abstain on Yukari, out on the rest. o/

Rinali

[soulbondage]

May I ask for crit please?

Re: Rinali

[soulbondage]

Yes sir and/or ma'am! o7

Re: Rinali

[soulbondage]

My grammar really sucks in this app, I was writing well past midnight on the app date, and it didn't make for the best coherency when I checked everything over. All the mistakes I should have rectified seem glaringly obvious now, I kind of fail ^^;

I reread the series recently, and I've gone through and written down everything Rinali said or is said about her to help me with the voice in the next app. One of my betas pointed out to me that I wasn't showing enough of her sweet side, and I agree, but I left it too late to actually do anything good with. I'll have more time now that my exams are over, and I can actually focus on the app. The feedback has helped, and I plan to reapp. Thank you for your help!