No Escape From Destiny

[inspired_being]

Author: inspired_being
Title: No Escape From Destiny
Rating: G
Pairing/s: None
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin, Gwaine, OC’s
Summary: Continuing from Seen and Hidden, False Representation and Escape Plans. Arthur can escape the castle but he can’t escape his mind.
Warnings: angst (but if you’ve read from the start it’s probably expected)
Word Count: 980
Prompt: #6 Whispers

Comments

[fuckyeah]

Oh my gosh, yay, more of this 'verse! Poor Arthur, it's easy to see why he's struggling so much now, but I'm glad he's starting to doubt Uther's views on magic.

[inspired_being]

xD Yes, and there should be more. So much more I want to convey in this 'verse.
I'm glad it's easy to see :) Thanks for sticking with it!

[yenny2206]

Yay you wrote more!!

Poor Arthur though. I want to hug him!

[inspired_being]

After my sign up comment, of course I did. Finding time was a bit hard, but I got there... just.

I think he would welcome the hug. If it wasn't so characteristic I'd probably write it in... then again, this is fanfic, so who knows. If the right moment presents itself I might :P

[hogwartsvixxxen]

Well done I want to hug Arthur hopefully in the next installment *hint hint* we'll see more of Arthur's doubt on Uther's view on magic.♥ *hugs* :)

[inspired_being]

Lol, hug away. I'm sure he'd appreciate it even if he would never ask for it.
Hint taken *waits for next prompt*.
Seeing more of Arthur's doubts is highly likely.
*hugs* ♥ :D

[hogwartsvixxxen]

*waits with you* ♥ *hugs* :)

[ms_notebook]

Oh my goodness, this prompt fits your next installment so well. Throughout the piece, Arthur is so wound up. Even though he wanted to go hunting to clear his mind, he still worries about his knights and how to improve their abilities. He still takes time to apologize to them. He still worries about his father, and his father's stance on magic, what is right and wrong. Now he's hearing voices! Oh poor Arthur, I just... hope he talks to someone soon. Merlin is worried about him.

Speaking of Merlin, I love how you show how worried he is (i.e. telling Gwaine to be quiet when he notices ARthur's irritation, being withdrawn and untalkative than he usually is, waking up when he senses that Arthur needs someone.

"You need to talk to someone."

I hope he does soon. I like that they both realize the same thing at once.

Amazing work!! I love this installment ^_^

[inspired_being]

I so ♥ you right now *hugs*

I love all your little observations. Now I know what other writers feel like when I leave those kinda of review xP (It's a very warm fuzzy feeling ;) )
note: Arthur is the one that tells Gwaine to shut up, not Merlin.

I like that they both realize the same thing at once
Did they both realize the same things at once or was something else happening *hint hint*

Thank you sooooooooooooo much for all your kind words *hugs tight* xD

[ms_notebook]

D'aw thank you! You deserve every word of praise, really (hugs)

And apologies about the mix-up with Gwaine and Merlin! I guess I was just so excited to read what happens next that I didn't look at the words carefully.

Ooo hinting at what? At what? I guess I'll find out next week ^_^ I'm sure it'll be as awesome as the rest of the series has been!

[inspired_being]

xD

That's okay. I forgive your excitement :P

Actually, if you look close enough, you should be able to work it out from the last section... but it may become clearer in the next installment if you can't figure it out.

[archaeologist_d]

I like how he's struggling. I lived even more that the younger ones had already figured Merlin out.

[inspired_being]

the younger ones had already figured Merlin out
Hmm... that wasn't my intention, but I can see how it might be read that way. Interesting.

Thanks for the comment!