No Escape From Destiny

May 16, 2012 11:03

Author: inspired_being
Title: No Escape From Destiny
Rating: G
Pairing/s: None
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin, Gwaine, OC’s
Summary: Continuing from Seen and Hidden, False Representation and Escape Plans. Arthur can escape the castle but he can’t escape his mind.
Warnings: angst (but if you’ve read from the start it’s probably expected)
Word Count: 980
Prompt: #6 Whispers ( Read more... )

c:merlin, *c:inspired_being, rating:g, type:drabble, pt 006:whispers in the night, c:gwaine, c:arthur

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ms_notebook May 17 2012, 13:08:46 UTC
Oh my goodness, this prompt fits your next installment so well. Throughout the piece, Arthur is so wound up. Even though he wanted to go hunting to clear his mind, he still worries about his knights and how to improve their abilities. He still takes time to apologize to them. He still worries about his father, and his father's stance on magic, what is right and wrong. Now he's hearing voices! Oh poor Arthur, I just... hope he talks to someone soon. Merlin is worried about him.

Speaking of Merlin, I love how you show how worried he is (i.e. telling Gwaine to be quiet when he notices ARthur's irritation, being withdrawn and untalkative than he usually is, waking up when he senses that Arthur needs someone.

"You need to talk to someone."

I hope he does soon. I like that they both realize the same thing at once.

Amazing work!! I love this installment ^_^

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inspired_being May 17 2012, 13:40:45 UTC
I so ♥ you right now *hugs*

I love all your little observations. Now I know what other writers feel like when I leave those kinda of review xP (It's a very warm fuzzy feeling ;) )
note: Arthur is the one that tells Gwaine to shut up, not Merlin.

I like that they both realize the same thing at once
Did they both realize the same things at once or was something else happening *hint hint*

Thank you sooooooooooooo much for all your kind words *hugs tight* xD

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ms_notebook May 17 2012, 13:46:53 UTC
D'aw thank you! You deserve every word of praise, really (hugs)

And apologies about the mix-up with Gwaine and Merlin! I guess I was just so excited to read what happens next that I didn't look at the words carefully.

Ooo hinting at what? At what? I guess I'll find out next week ^_^ I'm sure it'll be as awesome as the rest of the series has been!

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inspired_being May 17 2012, 13:54:43 UTC
xD

That's okay. I forgive your excitement :P

Actually, if you look close enough, you should be able to work it out from the last section... but it may become clearer in the next installment if you can't figure it out.

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ms_notebook May 17 2012, 13:59:29 UTC
Hmmmmm (rereads) GASP MERLIN IS PROJECTING HIS THOUGHTS AND WORRIES INTO ARTHUR'S MIND.

That's my hypothesis anyway ^_^ (is excited for next week's installment)

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inspired_being May 17 2012, 14:08:05 UTC
*claps*... *waits for next prompt*

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