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Unexpected

Dec 11, 2013 00:56

Author: ur_lionheart
Title: Unexpected
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur, Cedric
Summary: The first thought in Merlin’s head when he saw the man was confusion.
Warnings: None.
Word Count: 248
Prompt: #87 Arouse
Author's Notes: Merlin’s thoughts during S2E1: The Curse of Cornelius Sigan.

( Unexpected... )

c:merlin, *c:dead_pendragon, type:drabble, pt 087:arouse, p:arthur/merlin, rating:pg-13, c:arthur

Comments 14

osky291 December 10 2013, 20:22:48 UTC

Whoa, twist in the story! Nice one.

ur_lionheart December 12 2013, 06:51:34 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! :)

archaeologist_d December 10 2013, 22:19:24 UTC

Loved the twist and the characterization. Well done.

ur_lionheart December 12 2013, 06:52:11 UTC

I'm always worried about my characterizations! It's good to know that someone liked them! \o/

brunettepet December 10 2013, 23:59:34 UTC

I didn't see Arthur's "apology" coming at all. Nicely done!

ur_lionheart December 12 2013, 06:53:07 UTC

Hahah! I bet Merlin didn't see it either! ;)

witty_teacup December 11 2013, 23:37:09 UTC

I'm with everyone else--wasn't expecting the apology, but it was brilliant!

I really like this--it's simple and quiet but it does good on portraying Merlin's feelings--and awesome job on incorporating the prompt. This is absolutely lovely!

ur_lionheart December 12 2013, 07:12:37 UTC

Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I'm so glad you liked it!! \o/

clea2011 December 12 2013, 00:18:18 UTC

I like that twist at the end, and this is a lovely look at Merlin's feelings. Nicely done.

ur_lionheart December 12 2013, 07:13:06 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you liked! :)