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Lament for a King

Jan 18, 2020 18:55

Author: Gilli_ann
Title: Lament for a King
Rating: G
Pairing/s: Arthur/Merlin
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin
Summary: Merlin's grief and longing expressed in a poem
Warnings: None
Word Count: 105
Prompt: 395 Crimson
Author's Notes: This is sort of the poem equivalent of purple prose- maybe that's called crimson poetry? Poetry is a canon A/M thing, after all ( Read more... )

*c:gilli_ann, c:merlin, rating:g, type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, pt 395:crimson, c:arthur

Comments 3

archaeologist_d January 19 2020, 21:29:50 UTC

That was lovely. I do love the descriptions and the comparison of the sunset and sunrise with the same colors. Plus "his death broke its wing' was great.

gilli_ann January 21 2020, 17:46:48 UTC

Thank you, D. I won't be giving up my day job to become a poet any time soon, but it's fun to try something new.

ajsrandom January 21 2020, 22:30:07 UTC

A very lovely poem. I love all your imagery!