fic: The Course Of True Love Never Did Run Smooth (Part 5)

[calliglad]

Title: The Course Of True Love Never Did Run Smooth

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Arthur/Merlin

Spoilers: None whatsoever

Summary: AU. The Merlin cast in A Midsummer Night's Dream. Very little actual Shakespeare, more a comedy of errors.

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Gwen corners him, softly-softly, on Thursday and quietly demands to know what happened.

"No, it doesn't

Comments

[brunettepet]

Merlin catering to Will's feelings was completely wrong headed, I'm glad that Gwen poked at him about being stupid. Arthur not allowing Merlin to guilt himself out of the relationship was pitch perfect. That on stage kiss was delightful. Stick it, Will.

This made me laugh out loud: "It went well, then?"

"I'm not telling you that!"

"The play, Merlin." Lance getting cast in "Heroes" was the cherry on top of this confection. It was a real pleasure to read.

[calliglad]

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. This is so old, I had forgotten what a fun time I had writing it. I have a vague recollection that this entire fic was just an excuse to write that line about Lance at the end :D

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, I really appreciate the feedback.

[kathyh]

Here from a crack_van rec and just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this. Many thanks for this wonderfully witty and sweet story.

[calliglad]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[anyusa0030]

i love when arthur say i love you first and i really really loved this.

[calliglad]

Thank you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.

[maddiegirle]

That was a delightful story and it made me grin widely.

Thank you.

[sp_owl]

So cute. Love the awkwardness. Will always gets the short end of the stick--as it should be!