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calie15

Love Over Time 2/?

Mar 14, 2010 22:56

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character: elliot kent, fanfic, title: love over time, universe: love over time, rating: pg-13, ship: oliver/chloe, fandom: smallville, character: clark kent, character: connor queen

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kryptolori March 15 2010, 09:07:21 UTC

Ooo this is so good! stupid Ollie, he needs to wake up and smell the coffee lol

Fav part 'He watched her turn away and knew that she wasn’t going to let this go. The rift between them would grow even farther if he let her walk away. “Chloe...” He grabbed her arm and pulled her back around. She stopped, waiting, leaving the ball in his court. “I do care about you. It’s just that-.”' Damn Ollie don't let her walk away!

calie15 March 15 2010, 18:29:09 UTC

I know, Oliver is so angsty right now. lol. He'll resolve his issues in time.

maud26 March 15 2010, 10:16:12 UTC

I can't get enough of this story and it's only the second chapter.LOL

I just love Connor to death and the way he acts with his mom. Oliver need to get over his issues and I'd like to see a talk just between him and Connor.

Keep going girl, your fic is AWSOME!

calie15 March 15 2010, 18:24:38 UTC

Connor and Oliver will have a bit of a talk in the third chapter. I think Oliver won't be so angry, but I think the idea will still bother him, makes him uncomfortable. Not because it isn't something he wouldn't want, but because it caught him off guard and he never expected a future like what Connor is saying.

Plus, Chloe and Connor had more time to interact, he saved her life, she shared that memory with him which formed a connection to Connor for her. So Oliver is kind of on the outside looking in.

alltuesday March 15 2010, 12:34:48 UTC

I'm so hooked to this story! Loving it so far, can't wait to see how things would develop. Plot, characterization, everything is just great!

calie15 March 15 2010, 18:26:18 UTC

Thanks! I think everything should wrap up kind of neatly in the end. Leaving room for a couple of one shots though like I have been writing. I have some ideas for some one shots following soon after Love Over Time takes place, but I'm holding off writing them until I finish this. Chloe and Oliver's story will take a little longer to develop.

alltuesday March 17 2010, 06:31:34 UTC

I'm loving that your muse is on overdrive right now! And guh I've been enjoying those one-shots a lot. I'm a sucker for epilogues. :)

svelterose March 15 2010, 13:04:51 UTC

I love it. I was really enjoying all the stories you had for this universe last week! And god, that part about Batman made me laugh so hard. Ha! I can't wait to read the next part - Oliver and Chloe are just an awesome dynamic. :D

calie15 March 15 2010, 18:27:48 UTC

I really like the one shots. I'm looking forward to being able to expand this universe. And if you notice Connor does mention in this chapter how Oliver can barely stand in the same room with Bruce.

svelterose March 15 2010, 21:13:53 UTC

And if you notice Connor does mention in this chapter how Oliver can barely stand in the same room with Bruce.

I did notice which is why I made the Batman comment. :D I love the rivalry between these two characters. It's hilarious how Chloe uses it to her advantage too. LOL.

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calie15 March 15 2010, 18:31:10 UTC

You know that is a great idea...the way Chloe gets her powers back. I never thought of her getting them back after getting birth. To bad I didn't think of it first. But I think you should write it.

I do have something in mind for how she gets her powers back. It will most likely be a one shot. I'm not writing it yet though like I have written the other one shots for this universe because it would give away to much for this story.