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calie15

Love Over Time 2/?

Mar 14, 2010 22:56

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character: elliot kent, fanfic, title: love over time, universe: love over time, rating: pg-13, ship: oliver/chloe, fandom: smallville, character: clark kent, character: connor queen

Comments 33

dhfreak March 15 2010, 04:13:47 UTC

Love the story... you have me hook and wanting to know what will happen next lol

calie15 March 15 2010, 18:16:41 UTC

Thanks! I'm working on the third chapter now. I've got to stop doing one shots.

slytherinpunk March 15 2010, 04:21:56 UTC

Aww--I've got tears in my eyes and my heart hurts for Chloe. Why is Oliver so stubborn?! Lol. But this was a great update! I really loved to see how easy and naturally Chloe and Connor connected! And this: “Put it this way,” Chloe smiled. “If there was a twelve step program for him, I shoved it all into one step.”

Lol--that was so perfect and totally a perfect way to describe how she brought Ollie back! I loved the update, awesome job! =)

calie15 March 15 2010, 18:18:21 UTC

Awwwww. I know poor Chloe, and Oliver is being such an idiot. You know, as I wrote it I was surprised at how easily Chloe and Connor connected myself.

And that bit about the twelve step program...after I wrote it I was thinking myself that it was so true.

yraida March 15 2010, 04:25:19 UTC

amazingggggggg I love this story so much ;)

calie15 March 15 2010, 18:18:45 UTC

Thanks! And I love your icon!

yraida March 16 2010, 04:14:59 UTC

Thanks ;)I personally have a weakness for blond men (Justin is clearly one of them)

Your icon has always been one of my favorites :P

snowyowl_17 March 15 2010, 05:06:14 UTC

I love this story!! I am so glad that Connor was able to save Chloe, and I really hope that Oliver takes the time to get to know Connor. I would really like to see some fun father/son scenes between them.

Can't wait for more!!!

calie15 March 15 2010, 18:19:49 UTC

Of course he was going to save Chloe. Can't have her die can we? They'll have a little scene in the next chapter, but Oliver isn't going to be as easy to accept things as Chloe has been.

fresh_09 March 15 2010, 07:07:15 UTC

love this story. and why is oliver acting like he doesn't want a family. it's really weird. lol. and is chloe dead in the future, because that's the vibe i'm getting.

calie15 March 15 2010, 18:22:24 UTC

No, Chloe isn't dead. Not sure how you got that vibe, because Connor has had a pretty easy time with her. If she was I'm sure it would be harder for him to talk to her.

As for Oliver, the thought of family is a little foreign to him. And because he's risking his life everyday I don't think he expects to get that far in life. Plus, Chloe shared that memory with Connor, so at this point she has more insight and has seen first hand what it is like in the future. So it is a bit easier for her to accept and much more easier for her to form a connection with Connor.